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I really like this, I always wondered how Genasai would turn out in Athas.

A Sun/Ash genasai would be quite interesting with the extra manifestation feat and/or the PP. You'd be both the 'dark and the light'. Or i guess...a Dark Sun .

Honestly though, more articles like this, the druid, and the Duergar article are what we need.

I'll post the same thing here that I posted on CharOp:

Ember-Soul
+1 Reflex is unnecessary and unoriginal. It should have been replaced by something interesting.
I've  always had a problem with the wording of saving throw bonuses "against  ___", when they should instead be "against effects that cause ___".  Saving throws are made against effects. It sounds like a stupid nitpick,  but there we go. Either way, only against ongoing fire? Lame. Why not  just give them fire resistance?
Ashfall Evasion should allow for any  ability score and shouldn't be restricted to only three stats. I thought  that they learned their lesson about these in Dark Sun when they  introduced themes. Then again, Thri-Kreen still mess this up.
As for the thematic effects of the racial power, meh.

Magma-Soul
+1 Fortitude is unnecessary and unoriginal. It should have been replaced by something interesting.
The  other benefit is exclusively useful to melee characters, and that's not  good. Genasi are a very special issue because may consider them to be a  singular race, such that it's okay for some to be more specialized  because those options don't need to be selected if they wouldn't be  benefitial, and I can sort of understand that viewpoint, but it's still a  shame.
As for Flowing Magma, I've generally been pretty against  racial powers that include detriments to their user, and I wouldn't  consider this to be one of the exceptions. This is only passable because  of the aforementioned little Genasi dilemma, but it would still be  better if the excuse didn't need to exist. Also, this still has the  problem of being restricted to three ability scores.
And again, as far as thematics go, it's just too complicated for a racial power.

Sand-Soul
No  complains here. I actually like this one. No defense bonus, features  are reasonably unique and interesting, both mechanically and  thematically, and the racial power doesn't try too hard. Great  manifestation, definitely one of the better ones in general.

Sun-Soul
Repeat what I said about Ember-Soul with relation to the saving throw bonuses against ongoing damage.
This one does try to be more unique, though, with the cute little temperature and sun sickness things.
Sun  Flare still has the three ability score problem, and also apparently  missed the memo that accessory-less powers that target a NAD are now  supposed to be scaling at a rate of +3 at heroic, +6 at paragon, and +9  at epic.
The racial power here is more thematically interesting than Ashfall Evasion and Flowing Magma, but it's still only so-so.

Is there anyone else writing for Dragon these days, or has it become the Robert J Schwalb show?  It's not something I've a tremendous objection to, RJS's work is for the most part of good quality, and feels limited more by the WotC policies than his own skill as a writer/games designer.  But some variety in writers might help.

A hint to Wizards: there are plenty of people who'd write for Dragon for no money in exchange for the credit on their CV and the chance to enhance the hobby they love.