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5 years ago  ::  Jun 21, 2008 - 2:51PM #1
Saric
Date Joined: Apr 24, 2002
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This is a druid class that I worked on and I want some feedback and/or critique for it. The forums have been vastly unstable recently and for the time being I won't post it here until later. The link to the pdf is here. http://www.badongo.com/file/9999663
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5 years ago  ::  Jun 21, 2008 - 2:52PM #2
Saric
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Reserved for heroic tier.
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5 years ago  ::  Jun 21, 2008 - 2:52PM #3
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5 years ago  ::  Jun 21, 2008 - 2:53PM #4
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So many reservations, must be a good restaurant.
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5 years ago  ::  Jun 21, 2008 - 2:53PM #5
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5 years ago  ::  Jun 21, 2008 - 2:56PM #6
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5 years ago  ::  Jun 21, 2008 - 5:17PM #7
perrywrogers
Date Joined: Sep 5, 2004
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Hey,

Awesome amount of work as usual. I just did an initial scan through, and it looks pretty good so far. I'll do a more detailed read and give you some feedback.

But, so far . . . Wow!

Thanks for all the hard work.
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5 years ago  ::  Jun 21, 2008 - 6:56PM #8
mrwombat
Date Joined: May 27, 2008
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Quite phenomenal work there. Especially since I needed a druid for my campaign. :D

Some quick feedback: Snake's Swiftness (A-W, Attack 1) should probably have a +mod to the basic attack's damage to be in line with the Warlord's Commander's Strike. (Maybe choose between two at creation, like Warlocks)

Almost none of the daily attack powers have miss effects (including Reliable).

In the intro page, you list the power source as divine, but every single power has the Primal power source. Just an oversight.

I feel like a Bestial Fury druid would be better off with WIS as its tertiary score than DEX. That one's just a gut thing, though; I feel like they'd get more use out of it.

I'm also not sure about the Wild Shape Stance disclaimer on Bite of the Dragon (Shifter Attack 20). Both because Dragons can speak, and because you can't pick it up without having Shifter's Speech as a path feature. I'm not sure how I feel about the idea of giving a player a Recharge ability though. It makes sense, it's just odd.

Elemental Resistance (Elemental Savant Path Feature 16) references elemental specialty, which should probably be Touch of the Elements.

Various burst attacks target "all foes" or "all enemies" instead of "each [enemy/creature]" or "each [enemy/creature]...you can see". Just an inconsistency.
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5 years ago  ::  Jun 21, 2008 - 7:09PM #9
perrywrogers
Date Joined: Sep 5, 2004
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Trained skills: I'm inclined to want to allow Religion as a skill that the druid may choose to take as trained.

Class Feature: Bestial Fury: excellent concept-- allows the wild shaped druid to be "proficient" with its natural weapons

Wild Shaping: I like the idea of keeping you magical weapon properties. I'm looking forward to play testing it for balance. I guess I'll have to give our druid a magic weapon first. :-)

Snake's Swiftness: Perhaps the ally's attack should use the druid's Wisdom modifier for the damage bonus, because the druid is "guiding" the attack.

Bestial Slam: I think it should push the opponent a square if the opponent is size large or less.
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5 years ago  ::  Jun 21, 2008 - 9:36PM #10
Valdrax
Date Joined: Dec 9, 2006
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Saric wrote:

This is a druid class that I worked on and I want some feedback and/or critique for it. The forums have been vastly unstable recently and for the time being I won't post it here until later. The link to the pdf is here. http://www.badongo.com/file/9999663


I would love to take a look at this class, but I cannot for the life of me figure out how to download anything from this site, even after enabling JavaScript for all non-advertising sites. Is there some another place you can post it?

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