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5 years ago  ::  Apr 21, 2008 - 5:14AM #1
Evil_DM_Mk3
Date Joined: Oct 16, 2005
Posts: 245

I'll tell you a story
about Jack-a-nory;
and now my story's begun.
I'll tell you another
'bout Jack and his brother;
and now my story is done.

English, Traditional.


Well its back with a puff of nostalgia for British readers no less... To paraphrase a certain author's benevolent tyrant, All a galley crew need to know is how to row and that their helmsman is a good one.

Well I am, let us see if you can?

You don't have to be a writer, storyteller, or even a DM to participate in these contests. Even players have to be part of the storytelling aspect, interacting with the story, creating character backgrounds and history, or planning that advent into prestige classes and epic heroism!

These contests are meant to offer a challenge to your ability to think creatively and constructively within the possibilities of a D&D game. To use the tools at hand to craft something stimulating and enjoyable. That having been said, this month's challenge is called...

I am Legend.


Legends are a very important part of our heritage, from The Matter of Britain and the Mabinogion to The Gordion Knot and The Twelve Labours of Hercules, legends are a vital and often highly enjoyable part of both fiction and Role Playing Games. What we want from you in the following competition is this.

Create a Legend fit for inclusion in a game of Dungeons and Dragons with any notes that you feel relevant. Explain how recent events in that game have brought this legend new significance.

As always you will need to incorporate 3 of 12 touchstones provided by the judges. This time our touchstones are:

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  • The legend contains a prophecy, now coming to pass, about a major victory of good over evil. Explain how evil forces are moving against it.

  • Someone is searching for an artifact, but the artifact's very presence presents them with a problem/obstacle.

  • Current events mirror the legend, but with rather different results.

  • An ancient being/deity changes after eons for some reason.

  • The legend involves at least four different types of undead

  • The legend involves an unusual or otherwise notable dragon

  • The legend involves an unusually applied template/combination of templates such as a half-fiend angel.

  • The legend only involves one type of creature, other than outsiders or humanoids.

  • A major figure in the legend has a reputation that they do not deserve.

  • At least two significantly different versions of the legend exist. Include one in full and explain how and why the others vary.

  • One of the figures in the legend broke a vow or code of conduct.

  • Whilst the legend is well known, how it is told means that few realise it is in fact based on historical events.
    What a legend is, as far as we are concerned Show

    The all-knowing Wikipedia:]A legend is a story, that is probably about someone that did exist but has been twisted to seem more interesting and fascinating. This story is passed down generation to generation.


    Rules. For the reading of. Show

    * Format your entry as similar as possible to the Example Entry. Spoiler blocks are not preferred, if you are forced to use a Spoiler block, please use only one and contain your entire entry within it. Do not use multiple Spoiler blocks.
    * Core Material (DMG, PHB, MM) are preferred and do not need to be referenced when used in an entry. If you use non-Core material in your entry, a brief but sufficient explanation and/or footnote is required along with the book acronym and page number. Example: (BoE pg 78) A list of book acronyms can be found at this link: It's a long list.
    * Statistical information is usually not needed, requiring no more than a brief mention to establish rule basics that a DM can expand upon. Example: Walter the Barkeep wrote:

    A legend is a story, that is probably about someone that did exist but has been twisted to seem more interesting and fascinating. This story is passed down generation to generation.[/quote]

  • Rules. For the reading of. Show

    * Format your entry as similar as possible to the Example Entry. Spoiler blocks are not preferred, if you are forced to use a Spoiler block, please use only one and contain your entire entry within it. Do not use multiple Spoiler blocks.
    * Core Material (DMG, PHB, MM) are preferred and do not need to be referenced when used in an entry. If you use non-Core material in your entry, a brief but sufficient explanation and/or footnote is required along with the book acronym and page number. Example: (BoE pg 78) A list of book acronyms can be found at this link: It's a long list.
    * Statistical information is usually not needed, requiring no more than a brief mention to establish rule basics that a DM can expand upon. Example: Walter the Barkeep; Com1, Dag the Murderer; Rog5; good DEX, ranks in Bluff & Esc. Artist
    * If Stats are required or you chose to include full stat blocks, please format them correctly. Either format (original or new) is fine as long as the information is correct and readable.
    * Each applicant may only submit 1 entry to judging, and that entry is to be contained within a single post. Submitting two or more entries will result in the disqualification of each the entries. If you have more than one idea, please wait until after the competition closes before submitting additional entries. These subsequent entries will not be judged.
    * All entries must be the original, exclusive work of the applicant. If an entry is found to be copying the work of another, or has been posted for review prior to the competition, it will be disqualified.
    * Applicants are allowed a 15 minute period in which they are allowed to make edits to their entry. Any entry that has been noted as edited after this 15 minute period will be disqualified. This includes editing done by the board moderators, should the entry be in violation of the board’s code of conduct. It is recommended that an applicant use the board’s “preview post” function or write the entry off-line in a text editor to check the entry before posting. Once judging is complete, applicants are allowed to go back and edit their entry if they so choose.
    The Judging Show
    The competition will be judged according to the following guidelines. Each entry will be reviewed by each of the judges, who in turn will rate the entry on its creativity, adaptability, thematic consistency, technical information and rules use, as well as clarity.

    At no time will a judge relate any entry’s exact scores. After the competition closes, each judge is allowed to post commentary on each of the entries if they wish to supply such information. If an applicant does not wish to have commentary on their entry posted, they should mention so in their entry.
    • Creativity (15 points): This is the measure of the originality of a particular submission or how well it implements a given idea or suggestion. Thus high scores are reserved for entries that are completely unique, or provide a new twist on an old idea. Creativity can reflect entirely new ideas, thoughtful parodies of existing ideas, or unique derivatives of a classic archetype. This score also measures how well the entry fits the overall theme of the contest, as well as how well it incorporates the required elements and any optional suggestions. A creative entry might make the reader think "I didn't think of that!" or "I would like to use this in my campaign!"
    • Adaptability (10 points): This is a measure of how much effort would be needed for a DM to include the entry in any given campaign. This competition assumes all DMs have access to the three core books (DMG, PHB, MM) and entries that use these will score higher. Thus, the use of material from sources other than these “core” books can result in a lower score. Including descriptions on how to use the entry without the supplemental material, or having a brief synopsis of what the material entails can alleviate some of the effort a DM would need, thus allowing the entry to score well even with the supplemental material. An adaptable entry would make the reader think "This is great, I can include this in my game easily."
    • Rules Use (5 points): The completeness and accuracy of the entry is reflected in this score. This category includes adhering to the contest rules, following the entry example, including the required elements, and presenting the entry in a logical format. While effective use of typefaces such as italics or boldface can help an entry, the use of text color, alternate fonts, or spoiler blocks in an entry is not recommended.
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    The judges are Evil DM Mk3, Half_Dragon_Infernal and Cowczar. I (Evil DM Mk3) am coordinating judge.

    Competition will end at 12 midnight British Summer Time (GMT+1) on the 5th of May 2008. For reference that is (I think, please correct me) 7pm EST.

    FAQs

    I need clarification on 8:

    Type - Are you talking Aberration or Dragon or Undead here, or are we talking specific type, like an all sphinx legend?

    If by general "type" like Aberration, are we limited to Aberrations only in the legend? What if we're applying a non-Aberration template, like Half Dragon?

    Creature type. And if a template changes the type you use the new type. All creatures have to be the exact same type.
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    5 years ago  ::  Apr 21, 2008 - 6:31AM #2
    lastknightleft
    Date Joined: Jan 4, 2007
    Posts: 323
    Love ya Evil, glad to see this back, one thing though, you've got some spelling errors, in your bolded section you say explain who, I think you mean explain how

    in touchstone two it is artifact not artefact
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    5 years ago  ::  Apr 21, 2008 - 9:42AM #3
    mtbOgre
    Date Joined: May 21, 2007
    Posts: 343

    Evil DM Mk3 wrote:


    Nice Logo!

    Hey nice, a contest I can enter. Now I just need to come up with an entry

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    5 years ago  ::  Apr 21, 2008 - 9:50AM #4
    LeeAlucard
    Date Joined: Dec 27, 2007
    Posts: 201
    Wow! WOW! WOW!

    Okay, so, question, can I use something from the campaign I'm DMing? Please, pretty please? Because if so, I've already got a legend...
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    5 years ago  ::  Apr 21, 2008 - 9:56AM #5
    Ecalsneerg
    Date Joined: May 23, 2007
    Posts: 332
    My mind is compelling me to enter. Aaargh!
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    5 years ago  ::  Apr 21, 2008 - 10:06AM #6
    Evil_DM_Mk3
    Date Joined: Oct 16, 2005
    Posts: 245
    This is the sample entry.  It is not great, it is only an example.  I mostly made this up as I went along.

    The Broken Spiral and The Twisted Cipher.


    The legend.

    This is text that can be found in a fairly common human work known as the dozen fables.  The other eleven are Aesop style tales with no basis in real events.  The 7th fable however is somewhat different.  It also exists in a slightly different form in the Dwarven Text 1001 Days.  It is the tale of the 872nd day and has Mordirian as the mentor (who obviously does not die in this version), a Mountain Dwarf as the First student and a Durregar as the Second.  It has far more religious overtones but the message is the same,

    Once upon a time there where two students who studied under a wise and powerful master.  They learnt a great many things from him but they reached a point where he could not teach them any further, the first because he was not bright enough, although he persevered with all his will, the second because he was too proud and hungry for the knowledge and so could not see it. 

    And so he sent them away.  The first student began a business and used what he knew to better his fellows and improve his homeland.  In his spare time he continued to study, even though the chance of him understanding any better was slim.

    The second student used his vast knowledge to gain power and influence.  He too improved the lands and wellbeing of his fellows and took every opportunity to learn, but he was far too impatient and others suffered for his hunger.

    Several years passed and then both students where summoned in their dreams to the monetary, where their master was dieing.  As a final task to his two students he asked them to try and solve the one puzzle he had failed at.  He said that together they could unravel the mysteries of The Twisted Cipher, a book of great knowledge.  He also made them swear never to open The Broken Spiral, a hideous and dangerous tome that he had stored only because he could not destroy it.

    For several months the two worked at the book, seemingly nothing more than random letters with a series of runes down it’s spine.  The first student perceviered but the second’s resolve failed and be broke his promice and read The Broken Spiral.

    For a time the power it gave him was good and it made him strong.  But soon he began to suffer bad luck and those around him suffered.  Eventually the book called forth evil forces that swallowed him whole.

    It was a year later that the first student realised that to read the Cipher you had to fold its pages in careful patterns, as dictated by the runes.  The power it gave him was clean and pure and he was able to undo the damage caused by The Broken Spiral.

    True power is not given easily, not is true knowledge.  The easy path is always flawed.


    There really are a pair of books known as The Broken Spiral and The Twisted Cipher. 

    The Broken Spiral is identical to The Book of Vile Darkness save it also allows you to use Wish as a spell-like ability once per week.  It provides the basic xp cost for this basic function but you must provide any additional xp required.  If you are using the sanity rules it is also the most powerful form of Tome of Forbidden Lore.  Every time you use the wish function there is a 15+1 per previous use% chance that it will summon an aberration or Abomination (Epic level handbook) with a CR of your ECL+4 to +6 to attack you at some time during the next week.

    The Twisted Cipher is identical to The Book of Exalted Deeds save it requires you succeed a DC 35 Knowledge check for each of The planes, Arcana and Religion to read it.  It also allows you, as a standard action, to try and force nature to overpower any aberration or abomination.  Both of you roll d20+hd+Cha mod, you gain a +4 bonus on this roll.  If you equal or beat its score it is stunned for 4d6 rounds, even if it normally immune to stunning.  If it is extra planar it is instead returned to its place of origin, abominations are re-imprisoned in the place they came from.  If you are using the sanity rules it also makes you immune to both sanity loss and sanity checks.

    The Broken Spiral has recently re-emerged in a Drow library.  Seeing as the owner of the library is extremely powerful it looks likely the book may bring forth abominations to kill them, and they do not go back after they have done this.  The race is on to find The Twisted Cipher.

    Elements.

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    5 years ago  ::  Apr 21, 2008 - 10:07AM #7
    Evil_DM_Mk3
    Date Joined: Oct 16, 2005
    Posts: 245
    Sample entry:
    The Broken Spiral and The Twisted Cipher


    Entries:
    The Charnel Duke
    The Stonebacked Warrior
    Lady Elriss's Steed
    Bonefang the white
    The Legend of Old Invincible
    The Pyrite Dragon
    The Watchman
    The Legend of Noril’s Disgrace
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    5 years ago  ::  Apr 21, 2008 - 10:36AM #8
    Cowczar
    Date Joined: Dec 16, 2007
    Posts: 720
    You can just put the entry list at the end of the OP, if you want.

    Added to the rules:
    * No physical contact is allowed. All entrants are equal, no matter how they can fight. Keep it fair, and I don't wanna find mtbOgre in a gutter in the morning. We keep this clean.
    * Bribing the judges is never a good idea. We prefer donations.
    * Cowczar likes bagels.

    Anyway yeah. Let's have a good contest.

    EDIT: And mtbOgre, as long as you have not posted your legend before and it is original, by the RAW it is allowed.
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    5 years ago  ::  Apr 21, 2008 - 10:52AM #9
    Evil_DM_Mk3
    Date Joined: Oct 16, 2005
    Posts: 245

    LeeAlucard wrote:

    Wow! WOW! WOW!

    Okay, so, question, can I use something from the campaign I'm DMing? Please, pretty please? Because if so, I've already got a legend...


    Well technicaly it has to be original. But we have exactly 0 ways of finding out so, you know, as far as I am concerned if it is not allready on these forums it is fair game.

    Now go to it!

    I should have a little sample entry up soon.

    EDIT: I think Cowczar was trying to say the smae thing but got the name wrong.

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    5 years ago  ::  Apr 21, 2008 - 11:04AM #10
    Cowczar
    Date Joined: Dec 16, 2007
    Posts: 720
    Yes, yes I was. But mtbOgre, if you have an idea from somewhere else, you can still use it too.
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