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4 years ago  ::  Apr 22, 2009 - 3:43AM #1
ThePlaneswalker
Date Joined: Sep 3, 2008
Posts: 203
ok here is another humble attempt at converting another of my favorite classes into 4th ed. Th flavor comes directly from heroes of horror and so far only the class features are on the document. any suggestions and/or constructive feedback will be truly appreciated.

Last Update (July 02 2009):
http://www.box.net/shared/381j5skity

Updates so far:
· Class up to level 30.
· 3 paragon paths: Blightspeaker, Eternal Seeker of Elder Lore, and Loreweaver
· Feats
· Magic Items

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Playtest: Archivist Review
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4 years ago  ::  Apr 22, 2009 - 10:33AM #2
Crimson_Concerto
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A few issues...

1) Your Leader appears to have no healing mechanic class feature.
2) Your Thirst For Knowledge features seem to imply that your Archivist needs to have his Prayerbook in hand in order to cast spells at all. That kind of item dependency is not a good idea; you're turning it into a major restriction instead of a class benefit like what the Wizard has with his Spellbook.
3) Prayerbook is an implement? Why not just use the Tomes?
4) Speaking of implements, why no Holy Symbols?

Also, didn't Archivist just get renamed as Invoker?

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4 years ago  ::  Apr 23, 2009 - 12:05AM #3
ThePlaneswalker
Date Joined: Sep 3, 2008
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Crimson_Concerto wrote:

A few issues...

1) Your Leader appears to have no healing mechanic class feature.
2) Your Thirst For Knowledge features seem to imply that your Archivist needs to have his Prayerbook in hand in order to cast spells at all. That kind of item dependency is not a good idea; you're turning it into a major restriction instead of a class benefit like what the Wizard has with his Spellbook.
3) Prayerbook is an implement? Why not just use the Tomes?
4) Speaking of implements, why no Holy Symbols?

Also, didn't Archivist just get renamed as Invoker?


1) was working on it, re-download the file for an updated version with 1st level at will powers.
2) aye i went too much with the old 3.5 rules. Updated thirst for knowledge.
3) i don't own arcane power to look into, prayerbook is nostalgic to me.
4) Unlike a cleric, an archivist does not receive his power complement from whatever deity or cosmic force he worships. Rather, he must seek out and collect new prayers much as a wizard does, but from such esoteric sources as holy tablets, ancient steles, or other magical scriptures. An archivist uses divine magic from the passage and prayers he records in his prayerbook.


No, the flavor may coincide in some parts, but the overall theme and mechanic of the archivist doesn't resemble at all the 4th ed invoker.

A note on healing beacon. This class feature is completely different from your average leader. The archivist is not just another divine power source leader class. =)

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4 years ago  ::  Apr 23, 2009 - 9:16AM #4
Antioch
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I would consider having dark knowledge pertain to creature types based on trained skills. For example, you could use it on natural creatures if you have Nature trained, and immortals if you are trained in Religion.
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4 years ago  ::  Apr 24, 2009 - 1:01AM #5
ThePlaneswalker
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Antioch wrote:

I would consider having dark knowledge pertain to creature types based on trained skills. For example, you could use it on natural creatures if you have Nature trained, and immortals if you are trained in Religion.


Thanks for the advice. I updated the archivist up to level 2. More constructive criticism greatly appreciated. Link in first post.

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4 years ago  ::  Apr 24, 2009 - 2:17PM #6
Deafiler
Date Joined: Apr 3, 2009
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The Archivist looks really cool so far, but I'm a bit weirded out by one thing:
Every other Divine class starts with one or two Channel Divinity encounter powers, but the Archivist doesn't have any.
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4 years ago  ::  Apr 24, 2009 - 11:29PM #7
ThePlaneswalker
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Deafiler wrote:

The Archivist looks really cool so far, but I'm a bit weirded out by one thing:
Every other Divine class starts with one or two Channel Divinity encounter powers, but the Archivist doesn't have any.


Unlike a cleric, an archivist does not receive his power complement from whatever deity or cosmic force he worships. Rather, he must seek out and collect new prayers much as a wizard does. While yes, the archivist uses the divine power source, however he does not have a direct connection with deities this reflects on the lack of channel divinity... i also like thinking outside of the box, just because all the divine classes up until now have channel divinity abilities doesn't mean they will all have in the future, i just started the trend first

btw archivist updated to lvl 5.

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4 years ago  ::  Apr 25, 2009 - 12:07AM #8
Deafiler
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...Yeah, I guess that makes sense. His version of Channeling a Divinity is less channeling, and more using the leftover power of gods who have died out. Looking over the powers, this gets more and more obvious.

While I'd like if they still had a little of the old Archivist's 'Can learn any spell found on a scroll', it really turned the 3.5 Archivist into DnD's version of Powerthirst, and that kind of thing is why 4e is such an improvement over 3.5 (less absurdly overpowered casters).

I guess what I'm trying to say is, good job.
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4 years ago  ::  Apr 27, 2009 - 12:45AM #9
ThePlaneswalker
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Deafiler wrote:

...Yeah, I guess that makes sense. His version of Channeling a Divinity is less channeling, and more using the leftover power of gods who have died out. Looking over the powers, this gets more and more obvious.

While I'd like if they still had a little of the old Archivist's 'Can learn any spell found on a scroll', it really turned the 3.5 Archivist into DnD's version of Powerthirst, and that kind of thing is why 4e is such an improvement over 3.5 (less absurdly overpowered casters).

I guess what I'm trying to say is, good job.


Thanks i guess, any suggestions? btw archivist updated to 10th level

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4 years ago  ::  Apr 28, 2009 - 9:59AM #10
ThePlaneswalker
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Archivist updated to lvl 15. comments and suggestions still appreciated.
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