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6 months ago ::
Oct 13, 2009 - 4:40PM
#1981
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I have a recommendation for that, which I think Rabbit would agree with. There are other forums that aren't constantly being remodeled....
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6 months ago ::
Oct 14, 2009 - 1:42AM
#1982
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Okay I did a big update. Any thoughts?
http://www.4shared.com/file/184670517/1f9d2f1/Cat_Burglar_Final.html
cat burglar pdf 2.0 available
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6 months ago ::
Oct 14, 2009 - 1:56AM
#1983
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When it says, "Infect +27 melee (1d8+11 plus Infect)" and this is not a bite or tentacle, what are we talking about here? Is it like a tongue-spearing injection, like the Giger Alien with the crazy tongue, but it injects an infection substance? Could we call it something instead of the name of the secondary effects of the attack? The formatting is way better off now at least. 
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6 months ago ::
Oct 14, 2009 - 2:12AM
#1984
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Its the tongue thingie yes.
http://www.4shared.com/file/184670517/1f9d2f1/Cat_Burglar_Final.html
cat burglar pdf 2.0 available
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5 months ago ::
Oct 16, 2009 - 7:58AM
#1985
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I was a bit skeptical about the Infected template before, but now I like it. Also I think the Form of Madness is quite appropriate. I had been thinking of a Feeblemind-type effect, but I'm satisfied with the Form of Madness and the fear display. My worry about the Infected template is the Devour ability: If the Infected successfully magically devours its opponent, its parent Obyrith vomits that opponent up as a new They Who Lie In Wait 1d6 days later.
How does the creature that the Infected devoured magically get to the Obyrith's stomach? I think this should be toned down.
Bring Gleemax Back. Even as a failure, it was better than this.
http://community.wizards.com/durdur
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5 months ago ::
Oct 16, 2009 - 2:12PM
#1986
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If you guys are gonna keep that quickie-creative about Ak'chakro, you could use the term Rabbit used earlier, the 'Spawn of Ak'chakro', or even calling him "the Self-Blasphemed Carnosaur". Much catchier and terrifying than something lying in wait - potentially. You guys (and this is where I feel more comfortable speaking like I did when I lived down south: yall), pardon me milady - may keep whatever it was that little blurb that I was thinking, just go on and run with it.  (dear gods, these smilies are lame, pointless in-house crud designs) I think Rabbit has a great take on this critter, and the stats do look decent - I was just worried about the naming of the attacks, which didn't make sense to me why the attack and its additional damage would be called the same thing but not be the same. Everything else seemed perfectly rational in creating a creature of that caliber. Has anyone yet spoken with this artist to get an idea of what they would think about this statistic set, just in case? If not, I have a DeviantArt account I set up a little while ago just in case I got more ideas for artists that might enjoy helping out with artwork submissions and/or editing or post-production of the information/media in exchange for a free publication and their book-published image work in the public and name-mention in the credits, as well as page credit/captioning. I think both of you might enjoy joining Elftown.com and using wikipages there, and I hope that bhu considers at least joining ENWorld in our other fictional content relating to dinos/prehistory genre stuff... I think you both would enjoy Elftown more, however - especially you consider yourself an aspiring fantasy or scifi artist or author (and I use it for a lot of story/game content both internal/external, as well as private/public/passworded/comments/no-comments, etc.) - you can even host in-town polls - I don't know if they allow external viewer votes, but they might nowadays! - they update often and always fix known bugs.
-will
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5 months ago ::
Oct 18, 2009 - 5:49AM
#1987
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I was a bit skeptical about the Infected template before, but now I like it. Also I think the Form of Madness is quite appropriate. I had been thinking of a Feeblemind-type effect, but I'm satisfied with the Form of Madness and the fear display.
My worry about the Infected template is the Devour ability:
If the Infected successfully magically devours its opponent, its parent Obyrith vomits that opponent up as a new They Who Lie In Wait 1d6 days later.
How does the creature that the Infected devoured magically get to the Obyrith's stomach? I think this should be toned down.
Edited the entry so it makes a lil more sense. It's how this particular Obyrith is a threat. it may not be able to leave the Abyss unless summoned, but the Infected can. And it can kill opponents which the Obyrith can use to create more Obyrtih. Eventually if left unchecked they could pose a threat to the Tanar'ri, hence why the quote from a Demon that seems nervous about them in the entry.
http://www.4shared.com/file/184670517/1f9d2f1/Cat_Burglar_Final.html
cat burglar pdf 2.0 available
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5 months ago ::
Oct 18, 2009 - 5:51AM
#1988
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I'm considering Enworld Xido, especially if this forum gets any worse. But things are touchy in real life right now and I may temporarily lose web access. Let me take care of that problem first.
http://www.4shared.com/file/184670517/1f9d2f1/Cat_Burglar_Final.html
cat burglar pdf 2.0 available
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5 months ago ::
Oct 18, 2009 - 3:54PM
#1989
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:S Never good - but I have been there.... multiple times. Just take care and I am sure we will manage to keep an eye out for you. -will
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5 months ago ::
Oct 24, 2009 - 1:30AM
#1990
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okay I jsut need to ad the rest of the fluff and the example Infected and it's done! unless of course there are requests for changes..
http://www.4shared.com/file/184670517/1f9d2f1/Cat_Burglar_Final.html
cat burglar pdf 2.0 available
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