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pg. 162 - Lady Thandysha -
The NPC has 17 hp too few (the writer forgot her Constitution bonus and rounded up instead of down).
The NPC should be noted as possessing resistance to fire 5 because of her greater piwafwi.
The NPC's Reflex save entry should be +8 instead of +10.
The NPC's saving throw line should list her True Believer feat as a potential modifier.
The NPC's main melee attack includes the drowcraft bonus into the attack roll but not into the damage roll. Increase the damage bonus to +4.
The wall of evil and wrack spells are [Evil] and should therefore be CL 19.
The spell-like ability granted by the queen's scourge should be CL 12.
The NPC seems to be based on a 29 point ability buy rather than a 25 point ability buy.
The NPC's SQ should indicate her ability to sense hidden doors when passing within 5 feet.
The NPC should not have a Slight of Hand modifier listed as she has no ranks in the skill, and Sleight of Hand cannot be used untrained.
The NPC should not have a Use Magic Device modifier listed as she has no ranks in the skill, and Use Magic Device cannot be used untrained.
The NPC is short 9 skill points.
The NPC's possessions entry notes that information on both the greater piwafwi and the drow house insignia can be found in the Lords of Darkness supplement. Why give these references when the drow house insignia is covered on page 99 of this book while a notation on page 97 indicates that the greater piwafwi can be found in the Magic Item Compendium?

Despite the errors, I have to say that I am impressed that, for once, they gave a Cleric an aligned aura as a SQ. I've pretty much stopped bothering to note such things as errata since I never see it done correctly.

pg. 164 - Xil'etha Dhuvaryl -
The NPC should have the psionic subtype because she has levels in a psionic class.
The NPC has Kuo-Toan as a starting language despite the fact that it is not listed as a bonus language on page 36. Since it was listed as a bonus language in the Monster Manual you can either assume that it was accidentally left off of page 36 or that it was purposefully removed but that the example NPC did not take the change into account.
The NPC has 3 hp too many.
The NPC's speed entry should probably note her Psionic Charge feat.
The NPC's attack entries do not account for the burst aspect of the psychokinetic burst weapon.
The NPC's ranged attack option should note that she can throw a mind blade in the shape of a longsword or a bastard sword.
The stat block should note somewhere that the NPC's Wild Talent feat grants her 2 power points.
The NPC is 1 attribute point short of being a 25 point character. Increase her Constitution score to 14, raise her hp to 79, increase her Fort save to +5, and raise her Concentration modifier to +6.
The NPC's SQ should indicate her ability to sense hidden doors when passing within 5 feet.
The NPC's Jump modifier should note that her modifier increases to +16 while her Speed of Thought feat is active.

pg. 166 - Drow Inquisitor -
The NPC meets none of the feat requirements to enter the Blackguard prestige class.
Why does the NPC have an evil aura listed (presumably from her Cleric and Blackguard levels) on the aura line when the character on page 162 had her Clerical aura of evil listed on her SQ line?
The NPC's light fortification should be listed on her hp line.
The NPC has 3 hp too few if her first level was Rogue, 4 hp too few if her first level was Cleric, and 5 hp too few if her first level was Fighter. Assume that Rogue was her first level for the extra skill points.
I am unsure where the NPC gained a 1/day blur effect.
The NPC's melee entry notes that her weapon functions as a +1 good outsider bane morningstar. The Entry for the weapon on page 102 indicates that it functions as a +1 morningstar. Either modify the item entry or modify the stat block. Furthermore, if the weapon is indeed supposed to be a good ousider bane weapon, then simply adding 2d6 damage against good outsiders is insufficient, the weapon would also gain a +2 to attack and damage rolls against good outsiders.
The NPC's melee entry seems to assume that she will wield her weapon in two hands (despite needing to keep a hand free for spellcasting).
Delete the second melee entry. It appears to be a failed attempt at applying the good outsider bane property to the weapon.
I believe that the NPC's special actions entry should indicate spontaneouus casting (inflict spells).
I believe that the NPC's Evil domain increases the CL of all Evil spells (not just Cleric spells) that she casts. If that is so, then increase to 7 the CL of the spells summon monster III, demonhide, and summon monster I.
I believe that, unless a character has the Weapon Finesse feat, they resolve melee touch attacks using their Strength modifier. If that is so, then change the attack roll for the inflict light wounds spell from +16 to +14.
Although the NPC's ability scores add up to a 25 point character, they would still add up to a 25 point character if you raised her Strength to 15. This would affect nothing but her carrying capacity.
The NPC's SQ should indicate her ability to sense hidden doors when passing within 5 feet.
The NPC should have poison use as an SQ.
The NPC cannot have both the Sickening Strike and the Terrifying Strike feats, as she would not have qualified for either until 12th level and is currently 14th level.
Replace the feats Sadistic Reward, Sickening Strike, and Terrifying Strike (and remove reference to them in the attack options entry) with Cleave, Improved Sunder, and Power Attack, so that the NPC meets the Blackguard prerequisites.
The NPC is either short 4 skill points, assuming that her first level was either Cleric or Fighter, or 21 skill points, assuming that her first level was Rogue. Since it is more beneficial to assume that her first level was Rogue, give her 1 additional rank in Jump (+8 modifier), and 5 ranks in Balance (+10 modifier), Gather Information (+12 modifier), Knowledge (local) (+6 modifier), and Tumble (+10 modifier).
The NPC's Fiendish Servant should have an (augmented animal, extraplanar) notation.
The NPC's Fiendish Servant should have a natural armor bonus of +4.
The NPC's Fiendish Servant should have an AC of 18.
The NPC's Fiendish Servant should have a flat-footed AC of 15.
The NPC's Fiendish Servant has 1 hp too many (the writer rounded up).
The NPC's Fiendish Servant should have DR 5/magic.
The NPC's Fiendish Servant should have SR 10.
The NPC's Fiendish Servant should have magic strike listed as an attack option.
Should the NPC's Fiendish Servant receive an ability score increase for its 4th HD?
The NPC's Fiendish Servant should have a Climb skill modifier listed (+11) since it has a Climb speed and a resultant racial bonus to Climb checks.

Sorry for the two week delay. There was a family crisis.

pg. 169 - Favored Consort -
The NPC's dodge bonus to AC should not be part of his normal bonuses to AC. The dodge bonus granted by the Dodge feat only applies to one opponent while the Shadowborn Warrior feat only grants a dodge bonus under certain conditions. Lower the NPC's AC, touch AC, and flat-footed AC by 1 point.
The NPC is 2 hp short. The writer gave him average hp for first level.
The NPC's saving throw entries imply that the cloak of the consort only penalizes his Will saves. The wording of the cloak's entry implies that it affects to all three saves.
The NPC should not have light blindness indicated as a weakness as it is negated by his cloak of the consort.
The spider boon quality applies to armor rather than weapons and thus cannot apply to the NPC's hand crossbow.
The NPC cannot have the enervation spell prepared because it is from one of his prohibited schools.
The NPC should be able to use his darkness spell-like ability twice each day due to his Instinctive Darkness feat.
The NPC should have an SQ entry to indicate his ability to sense hidden doors when passing within 5 feet.
The NPC is short one bonus feat (likely from his Eldritch Knight prestige class).
The NPC's skills block only adds up if you ignore the fact that Bluff, Diplomacy, Listen, and Spot are cross-class skills for all of the NPC's levels. Remove a total of 12 ranks from among the NPC's skills (note that Search is already being used at default).
The NPC does not need cloudkill listed in his spellbook as it is already listed under his list of prepared spells.