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Switch to Forum Live View They Wasted A Perfectly Good Name, Round 2; Eaten by Spiders
4 months ago  ::  Feb 04, 2013 - 8:45PM #61
CommanderJim
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I vote for KeeperofManyNames. Honorable mention goes to Dr_Demento. I think both did really well in presenting the horror trope of spiders erupting from inside of you. With Keeper's card, I particularly liked the originality of having it be a player, instead of a creature, being eaten.
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4 months ago  ::  Feb 04, 2013 - 9:16PM #62
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Feb 4, 2013 -- 8:45PM, CommanderJim wrote:

I vote for KeeperofManyNames. Honorable mention goes to Dr_Demento. I think both did really well in presenting the horror trope of spiders erupting from inside of you. With Keeper's card, I particularly liked the originality of having it be a player, instead of a creature, being eaten.



Same for me, including giving myself an honorable mention.

Really this round felt like a dozen variations on the same card, and none of them felt very interesting. I wish I had actually put that GIF in my post. Keeper had an interesting take though (I kind of wish that the controlling player was also in danger og being eaten by spiders though) 

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Aug 19, 2010 -- 5:52PM, Vektor480 wrote:

Aug 19, 2010 -- 4:54PM, Dr_Demento wrote:

Aug 19, 2010 -- 4:27PM, TranscientMaster wrote:

Aug 19, 2010 -- 3:07PM, Dr_Demento wrote:

Riggers , every Rigger in print so far boosts other Riggers .



Moriok Rigger does absolutely nothing to boost other riggers. You are incorrect.



Moriok Rigger is not a Rigger in print. Only in Errata

WHAT NOW!

(yes, I did put that phrase in for that exact reason)


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4 months ago  ::  Feb 04, 2013 - 10:04PM #63
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White boardwipes, period. Black/Red usually boardwipe through damage or other means (-1/-1 counters) Hence why I said that White/variants boardwipe unless timeshifted, excluding the odd red annihilation spell (which costs a ton and usually gets rid of more than creatures). Green doesn't boardwipe often, and absolutely hates flying (hence why Green usually has Reach) so giving Green a limited wipe should involve what it hates-flying. And sorcery speed, obviously. Day of Judgment would be OP as an instant- heck, you have to go to to do it instant speed with Rout

Anyway, no votes. I don't like any of them, not even really my own.
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4 months ago  ::  Feb 04, 2013 - 10:20PM #64
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Feb 4, 2013 -- 12:09PM, theatog wrote:

Eaten By Spider
Enchantment
Spider creatures you control have "when this creature enters the battlefield, you may destroy target flying creature."




Although you changed the name I vote for your entry.


I wish I had made a flash foliage type of card maybe with a bigger effect putting multiple spiders into play with deathtouch blocking multiple creatures. As others have noted there aren't really any great entries. I do like the name eaten by spiders but it was challenging to create a card that really lives up to that name (as we can see by the entries).

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4 months ago  ::  Feb 04, 2013 - 10:36PM #65
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Cacooning Spider creature spider
: target creatures does not untap on uptap step
    until this untaps.
This may stay tapped on your untap step.
  If this does, put a -1/-1 chip on targetted creature.

               ~having no stomach for it,
 the spider uses the hide of the prey as a bag
              to hold the digestive acids.

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4 months ago  ::  Feb 04, 2013 - 11:07PM #66
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Feb 4, 2013 -- 5:49PM, Imidazoline wrote:

OK, I'm voting for Rumor. I was a bit underwhelmed tbh.



Are you serious right now? A lot of times I feel like people who have been on the forums and been friends for a long time are constantly just turning everything into a circlejerk, and this is a good example. What could possibly compel you to vote for this other than knowing who made it?

/putupyourdukes

I vote for Mown's card, it's terrifying. Like the creature struggles against the webs while being consumed.

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4 months ago  ::  Feb 04, 2013 - 11:41PM #67
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I think I had maybe one conversation with Rumor prior to his reappearance a couple of weeks back, and it was:

Imi: Hey, I've been here fr about 6 months. Here are some posters I like and why! {List including Rumor}

Rumour: Oh gee thanks, you're swell.

But if you'd like reasoning, sure. Coming up.

 
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4 months ago  ::  Feb 05, 2013 - 12:58AM #68
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Feb 2, 2013 -- 4:29PM, cazoo wrote:

Eaten by Spiders  
Intsant

You may place one 1/1 spider token with reach and wither onto the battlefield

Morbid - You may instead place three 1/1 spider tokens with reach and wither on the battlefield, if a creature has died this turn.


I don't get 'eaten', even with morbid. Not a bad card.

Feb 2, 2013 -- 4:55PM, purplebackpack89 wrote:



Eaten By Spiders

Tribal Instant-Spider

Cast Eaten by Spiders only during your turn and only during combat.

Spider creatures you control gain deathtouch until end of turn.  Non-Spider creatures you control gain defender until end of turn. (They can't attack)


At the end of this phase, put a 0/2 Spider token on the battlefield with reach and a number of +1/+1 counters equal to the number of creatures that died this turn.


Overly complex, narrow, and you pretty much end up with a 0/2 unless their about to die anyway.

Feb 2, 2013 -- 5:04PM, Jahikoi wrote:

Eaten by Spiders -

Sorcery


Destroy target non-artifact creature. Put 3 1/2 green Spider creature tokens onto the battlefield.


I can get on board with this, but it's dull. When trying to impress with a name (ie, top down) a Violet Pall card isn't going to do it, even if this one does get three power six tough and kill a guy for 5.

Feb 2, 2013 -- 5:20PM, CommanderJim wrote:

Eaten by Spiders
Enchantment - Aura (U)
Enchant creature with flying
At the beginning of each upkeep, tap enchanted creature and put a 1/2 green Spider creature token with reach onto the battlefield.
When you control X or more Spiders, where X is enchanted creature's toughness, enchanted creature's controller sacrifices it.


Flying hate with black up is disappointing. An interesting death trigger that's pretty neat.

Feb 2, 2013 -- 5:41PM, HairlessThoctar wrote:

Eaten by Spiders

Enchantment
Rare
Whenever a non-token creature dies, put a hatchling counter on Eaten by Spiders, then put that many 1/2 green Spider creature tokens onto the battlefield.   


Spiders eat guys, got it. I like the scale as the game progresses. Not scary for me. I kind of wanted to see some chomping, and nothing happens to the corpse! These are favour nitpicks because I like this one.

Feb 2, 2013 -- 5:43PM, Cabal_Rituals wrote:

Eaten by Spiders
Instant
Exile up to one target creature and any number of target creature cards from graveyards. For each card exiled this way, put a 1/2 green Spider token with reach onto the battlefield.


More Pall action, but this one's insane. Instant speed graveyard neutering plus kill a guy plus get a billion dudes plus no flavour. I like the concept.

Feb 2, 2013 -- 5:50PM, altimis wrote:


Eaten by Spiders --
Instant (U)

You may cast Eaten by Spiders only if you control a Spider.
Destroy target attacking creature.
At the beginning of your next upkeep, put X 1/2 black and green Spider creature tokens with reach onto the battlefield, where X is that creatures toughness.


Next upkeep seems unnecessary, and the drawback of casting nly if you control makes the fact it costs 4 kind of suck, though this one is well put together.

Feb 2, 2013 -- 6:01PM, Rumor wrote:

Eaten by Spiders -
Enchantment - Aura
Enchant creature
At the beginning of your upkeep, put a -1/-1 counter on enchanted creature.
When enchanted creature dies, put X 1/2 black Spider creature tokens with reach into play, where X  is the number of -1/-1 counters on it.
Most spiders spin an egg sac in which to hold their young.  Some, however, find the living make betters hosts.


Flavour gold, and this is a favour contest really. (Well that's how I see it). Spiders grow in it until it dies! It's actually eaten by spiders. The reason I liked this one over Dud's was elegance of wording - Dud's granted the ability to h creature, while it's cleaner to have it on the aura. Well costed and actually in color.

Feb 2, 2013 -- 6:07PM, 3-7-15-1-292 wrote:

Eaten by Spiders
Sorcery
Destroy all creatures with flying. For each creature destroyed this way, put a 1/2 green Spider creature token with reach onto the battlefield.
Every bug, bird, demon or dragon is caught in there neverending web. From each carcass grow more of their horde. 


This is cool flavourfully, but questionable from a color perspective for me. It doesn't seem at all black, and flying wipe s pretty hardcore, even for green.

Feb 2, 2013 -- 6:19PM, Nephrolith wrote:



Eaten by Spiders
Enchantment
At the beginning of your upkeep, your life total becomes equal to the number of Spiders you control.
At the end of each endstep create a 1/2 Green Spider token with Reach.

"Within the web that they weave so well,
my mind will sing the song of hell,
and when eight legs crawl through my skin,
I will rejoice in their silky spin."
- Stanza 64, Liturgy of the Auburn Recluse


This is awesome, just not balanced fr me. Anything that literally can kill me with 'EoT Pyroclasm' is pretty severe.

Feb 2, 2013 -- 6:45PM, IceMetalPunk wrote:

Eaten By Spiders
Sorcery
Destroy up to X creatures. For each creature destroyed this way, put a 1/1 green Spider token with reach onto the battlefield.
"Nom nom, yum yum, eat it, eat it up." -Arachnoid chant


Clearly colour issues here, and while I commend the use of flavour text, it's very odd.

Feb 2, 2013 -- 9:08PM, Tevish_Szat wrote:

Eaten By Spiders

Sorcery
As an additional cost to cast Eaten By Spiders, tap any nuber of untapped spider creatures you control
Exile target creature with flying.  For each spider tapped to cast Eaten by Spiders, exile another target creature.  For each creature exiled this way, put a 1/2 black and green spider token with reach onto the battlefield

(It's not a typo -- bonus targets for tapping spiders do NOT have to have flying)


the target change is cute, but ultimately confuses the card I think. Then with this being either mono-black that hates on fliers is odd and mono green that exiles stuff is weirder.

Feb 2, 2013 -- 9:11PM, Habreno wrote:

Eaten By Spiders|

Sorcery


Destroy all creatures with Flying. Put a 2/2 Spider cretaure token with Reach onto the battlefield for each creature destroyed this way.

"They've overrun us all! I cannot escape!" - Last words of an Insectile Aberration.


See previous comments re: green hate.

Feb 2, 2013 -- 10:48PM, Dr_Demento wrote:

Eaten by Spiders
[u]Instant

Destroy target creature, that creature's controller puts X 1/1 green spider creature tokens with reach and deathtouch onto the battlefield, where X is that creatures power.
The spiders refuse to eat the skin of a victim, choosing instead to wait inside for their next meal.

Inspired by this gif 
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Just kidding, I'm not thaty mean


this is very similar to others as well. Much better flavoured.

Feb 3, 2013 -- 12:43AM, Ulcaster wrote:

Eaten by Spiders
Enchantment- Aura
Enchant creature
Enchanted creature can't attack or block.
At the beginning of each upkeep, put a -1/-1 counter on enchanted creature.
When ~ is put into a graveyard from the battlefield, return ~ to its owner's hand.
Sometimes it's the smallest creatures that cause the most harm.


this is pretty cool, but then their's the Pacifism. In green black.

Feb 3, 2013 -- 2:57AM, Edacade wrote:

Eaten by Spiders
Enchantment (Rare)
, : Destroy target permanent with a web counter on it.
Tap an untapped Spider creature you control: Choose one--Put a web counter on target nonland permanent; or, untap ~.
"Don't have the courage inside me to tell you please let me be..." --No Doubt, Spiderwebs


Really quite interesting. But you give green a way to kill creatures outside of creatures / fighting / weird plummet. Oh, and repeatable LD.

Feb 3, 2013 -- 4:34AM, Mown wrote:

Now, I don't actually think Eaten by Spiders is a very good name.

Eaten by Spiders
Enchantment - Aura
Enchant tapped creature
If enchanted creature would untap, put a -1/-1 counter on it and create a green 1/2 spider creature token with reach instead.


See, this is also good, I was just looking at more flavour, and the tapped target restriction seems potentially pointless, though it is functionally relevant.

Feb 3, 2013 -- 5:42AM, morticianjohn wrote:

Eaten by Spiders 2gg
Tribal Sorcery - Spider
Destroy each creature with flying or destroy target non-creature permanent.


OMG another green flying wrath. Needs to choose, and still costs less than Rootgrapple .

Feb 3, 2013 -- 5:52AM, Orzel wrote:

Eaten by Spiders
Sorcery
Put a 1/3 Spider creature token with reach into the battlefield. It fights target creature with flying you don't control.


A good way for green to kill an X/1 guy in colour. This is OK, but looking for more.

Feb 3, 2013 -- 8:44AM, CandyWife20 wrote:

Eaten by Spiders BG2 Sorcery Destroy target creature. Then but X 1/2 green and black spider creature tokens with reach onto the battlefield where X is the destroyed creatures converted mana cost. With silk as strong as steel, their webs are perfect to catch insects, birds,...drakes, whichever happens upon the nest first.


pretty much identical to others.

Feb 3, 2013 -- 10:36AM, SimonGlume wrote:

Eaten by Spiders
Instant - Trap
If all creatures left the battlefield this turn and you cast no other spells this turn, you may pay rather than pay ~'s mana cost.
Put a 1/2 green spider creature token with deathtouch and reach onto the battlefield for each creature that left the battlefield this turn.   


The trap is a neat touch, though I'm not a huge fan of the very specific 'replace guys if you get wrathed'. But otherwise neato.

Feb 3, 2013 -- 12:48PM, KeeperofManyNames wrote:

Eaten by Spiders  
Enchantment--Curse
Enchant Player
At the end of each turn, put X 1/1 black spider creature tokens onto
the battlefield under your control, where X is the amount of life enchanted player
lost this turn. Then, if that player's life total is less than the number of spiders on
the battlefield, that player loses the game. 


Seems pretty serious. The idea of the curse is really cool. I like this quite a bit flavourwise, and it's very creepy. This was a vote contender for me,mthough in the end I was unsure on balance.

Feb 3, 2013 -- 1:13PM, bay_falconer wrote:


Eaten by Spiders

Sorcery

Destroy target creature. Put X 1/2 green Spider creature tokens with reach onto the battlefield, where X is that creature's toughness.

Imported from the last thread.


Pretty Sure I've seen this already.

Feb 3, 2013 -- 5:45PM, GeorgeW wrote:

Eaten by Spiders |
Enchantment
Sacrifice a non-token creature you control : Put 1+X 2/2 green spider creature tokens into play, where X is the number of spiders you control.
More for the brood.


Hey, a neat concept. This is overall too powerful though, as it makes all your guys pretty resistant. To everything, as well as swarms. The presence of black is not necessarily required here either. 

Feb 4, 2013 -- 7:50AM, ChaosLight wrote:

Feb 2, 2013 -- 11:40AM, ChaosLight wrote:


Eaten By Spiders
Sorcery
Put two 1/2 green and black spider creature tokens with deathtouch and reach onto the battlefield. Then each of those tokens fights another target creature.



A neat idea, though similar to others, and with ambiguous wording.

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4 months ago  ::  Feb 05, 2013 - 1:01AM #69
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I like edacade's and tevish_szat's designs.
But which to choose?
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Feb 5, 2013 -- 9:38PM, Dr_Demento wrote:

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4 months ago  ::  Feb 05, 2013 - 1:20AM #70
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Thanks Imi! This makes it tons easier to reference!

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Feb 2, 2013 -- 5:50PM, altimis wrote:


Eaten by Spiders --
Instant (U)

You may cast Eaten by Spiders only if you control a Spider.
Destroy target attacking creature.
At the beginning of your next upkeep, put X 1/2 black and green Spider creature tokens with reach onto the battlefield, where X is that creatures toughness.


Next upkeep seems unnecessary, and the drawback of casting nly if you control makes the fact it costs 4 kind of suck, though this one is well put together.



Thanks. As for the next upkeep, it's supposed to show the spiders growing... in hindsight I would've liked this better. (And it's more towards my original design back in the day.)

Eaten by Spiders --
Instant (U)

Destroy target attacking creature, and put X 1/2 black and green Spider creature tokens with reach onto the battlefield, where X is that creatures toughness.
At the beginning of your next upkeep, you may exile that creature card from a graveyard. If you do, you may have Spider tokens you control become 2/4 black and green Spider creature tokens.

Territorial, agile, and extremely hungry.

You get to block with them as 1/2 with reach, but when you attack with them, if they've eaten their dinner, they can become 2/4.

Feb 5, 2013 -- 12:58AM, Imidazoline wrote:


Feb 2, 2013 -- 9:08PM, Tevish_Szat wrote:

Eaten By Spiders

Sorcery
As an additional cost to cast Eaten By Spiders, tap any nuber of untapped spider creatures you control
Exile target creature with flying.  For each spider tapped to cast Eaten by Spiders, exile another target creature.  For each creature exiled this way, put a 1/2 black and green spider token with reach onto the battlefield

(It's not a typo -- bonus targets for tapping spiders do NOT have to have flying)


the target change is cute, but ultimately confuses the card I think. Then with this being either mono-black that hates on fliers is odd and mono green that exiles stuff is weirder.



I agree that this card is cool, but as worded is confusing. Is each exiled card getting you a 1/2 spider, or is only the creatures exiled via tapping a spider?
Also, it shouldn't really be hybrid. is fine.

Feb 5, 2013 -- 12:58AM, Imidazoline wrote:


Feb 3, 2013 -- 2:57AM, Edacade wrote:

Eaten by Spiders
Enchantment (Rare)
, : Destroy target permanent with a web counter on it.
Tap an untapped Spider creature you control: Choose one--Put a web counter on target nonland permanent; or, untap ~.
"Don't have the courage inside me to tell you please let me be..." --No Doubt, Spiderwebs


Really quite interesting. But you give green a way to kill creatures outside of creatures / fighting / weird plummet. Oh, and repeatable LD.




Though Imi says it's repeatable LD, it's really not (Psst, Imi... nonland permanent 8^p) it is possible toturn that into LD with counter manipulation, but nevertheless this is by far my favorite.
VOTE: Edacade

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Feb 5, 2013 -- 9:38PM, Dr_Demento wrote:

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