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6 months ago ::
Nov 22, 2012 - 9:59AM
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Date Joined:
May 17, 2012
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edit: Starts with fewer counters. Costs more mana. Removed Shroud. Boxof   Artifact When ~ enters the battlefield it gains a storage counter. [t]: Remove a storage counter from ~. Draw two cards. [t]: Discard a card, ~ gains a storage counter.
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6 months ago ::
Nov 22, 2012 - 10:07AM
#2
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Boxof
Artifact
Shroud
When ~ enters the battlefield it gains 2 storage counters.
[t]: Remove a storage counter from ~. Draw two cards.
[t]: Discard a card, ~ gains a storage counter.
So for UU you get four cards over two turns, and are left with a useful artifact at the end of it?
Seems significantly too powerful.
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6 months ago ::
Nov 22, 2012 - 10:14AM
#3
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Date Joined:
May 17, 2012
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There are card draw cards for just 1, although they do tend to be nicely balanced. I've reduced the power.
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6 months ago ::
Nov 22, 2012 - 3:16PM
#4
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It's still ridiculous in terms of power level. It's more efficient than Divination. I like the 'delayed loot' quirk, but this realisitically costs 4 or 5 as is. Also, shroud seems pointless.
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6 months ago ::
Nov 22, 2012 - 3:50PM
#5
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Date Joined:
Nov 15, 2012
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the player can't use other cards to untap the artifact
TLDR
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6 months ago ::
Nov 22, 2012 - 4:19PM
#6
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Date Joined:
Dec 27, 2009
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Repeatable draw engines generally cost at least three. 
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6 months ago ::
Nov 22, 2012 - 4:19PM
#7
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Date Joined:
Mar 23, 2006
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the player can't use other cards to untap the artifact
so? you need a loot counter to do anything.
120.6. Some effects replace card draws.
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6 months ago ::
Nov 22, 2012 - 5:00PM
#8
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Date Joined:
May 17, 2012
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wow, good point with Divination, seems it was a bit cheap.
Maybe the 2nd ability could give Shroud instead of it having shroud all the time, preventing things being discarded into play too. Might allow for a CMC reduction of 1, comes out later than I would like at the moment.
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6 months ago ::
Nov 23, 2012 - 12:04AM
#9
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Date Joined:
May 29, 2007
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Your new card is less complicated than your previous designs, but you have to stop giving most of them shroud.. Exciting interactions that can be discovered and then abused are very important and make the game fun! 
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6 months ago ::
Nov 23, 2012 - 11:22AM
#10
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Date Joined:
May 17, 2012
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I'll remove Shroud and 1 from the mana cost later.
You could help me with thinking up a decentive for removing it from your opponent after they've used its 2nd ability.
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