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9 months ago ::
Oct 20, 2012 - 9:52PM
#11
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Date Joined:
Dec 11, 2005
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I agree with the comments about the errors detracting from the story. The first error I noticed was
"Only a fraction of the Rakdos followers will the games, to do so is to put life and limb on the line."
Pretty sure they meant to say "will enter the games"
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8 months ago ::
Oct 26, 2012 - 8:41PM
#12
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Date Joined:
Jun 21, 2010
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All I really care to complain about is that the story has an abrupt end. It's not like with the Garruk one where he shows up and can obviously be centerpiece in the next one. This one just cuts off, and the only time they do that is for a weekly part sequencing. The thing is, there's no part 2 next week. The next time this story comes up, there's literally no way to understand it without this one.
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