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1 year ago  ::  May 09, 2012 - 2:01PM #1
MrThatzARap
Date Joined: May 5, 2012
Posts: 4
Basicly its self explanitory.
My first card making try,

Enjoy!


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1 year ago  ::  May 09, 2012 - 2:10PM #2
Sebanovich
Date Joined: Jun 6, 2007
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Drackor the Sea Serpent 
Legendary Creature - Serpent
Whenever Drackor the Sea Serpent attacks, gain 4 life and discard a card.
5/4

This card should be black.
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1 year ago  ::  May 09, 2012 - 3:19PM #3
Zokorad
Date Joined: Sep 26, 2011
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May 9, 2012 -- 2:10PM, Sebanovich wrote:

Drackor the Sea Serpent 
Legendary Creature - Serpent
Whenever Drackor the Sea Serpent attacks, gain 4 life and discard a card.
5/4

This card should be black.




He made it 5/6

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1 year ago  ::  May 09, 2012 - 5:35PM #4
blurrymadness
Date Joined: Sep 3, 2010
Posts: 57
For blue/red maybe change it to:
Drackor -
Creature - Serpent
Islandwalk
Whenever ~ attacks draw a card. If that card is a spell you may cast it as though it had flash. If you do ~ gains +X/+0 where X is that cards converted mana cost. If you don't ~ gains +X/+0 where X is the number of cards in your hand and you discard a card.
3/6

Feels like a blue creature, beats you like a red creature, acts like a red blue creature. Feels right to me.

Obviously I've made one inspired off of your creation, but almost nothing like it. The gaining life thing is the *opposite* of red in all respects and blue rarely gains any life; I can't actually think of a card that allows blue to have life gain without being either colorless or hybrid.
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1 year ago  ::  May 09, 2012 - 6:28PM #5
SleetFox
Date Joined: Feb 18, 2010
Posts: 5,001
The name pretty much mandates this card be blue, but the actual card is not even remotely blue.  This card is unworkable without changing its name or what it does entirely.  Possibly try this:

Some New Name -
Legendary Creature - [creature type]
Whenever Some New Name attacks, gain 5 life and discard a card.
5/5
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