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1 year ago ::
May 23, 2012 - 9:09PM
#191
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Eh, I guess I should have kept the more broken effect and gone with a little elf body for 5. Then I guess it wouldn't be so similar to Sifting for two. I still feel it's a different and appropriate way for black to do it, but at least the original effect allowed for Crypt Creeper-ing etc of the targeted card in response to the trigger.
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1 year ago ::
May 23, 2012 - 11:51PM
#192
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Yay, all comments are in! Just so I say it: Affinity for spells cast this turn? Affinity-Storm? For being similar to two pretty overpowered mechanics, it seems balanced, maybe even on the weak side. Still, it's a cool intro to the mechanic and lets you come up with Manaweave combos for normal cards too
The popular opinion seems to be that the mechanic is weak. I can see how that works, though I was planning for the mechanic to be abused in the block. I was thinking that there would be a good bit of Suspend cards to allow you to stack them all to come into play on the same turn. I thought things like that would help lower the cost, not to mention the mechanic wasn't meant to power out the cards quite the way people seem to be thinking. It was more that playing enough before it would make them nearly free, almost like a trap. I see that it wouldn't work quite that way, but that was the intent.
I think I prefer Manaweaver over razorborne's mechanic, since it's a bit easier to control and doesn't go spell, spell, ASDGSADSAD you're dead. Not big on the name though. However, I am slightly sad that it doesn't actually let you cast the spell for less, unless you only cast 0-cost spells. The activated ability could be better excecuted, as it is currently in conflict with the whole casting a lot of spells. I'd almost go as far and say that you could just have him tap, or even make it into a passive, so players won't have to ask themselves if the ability applies to newly drawn cards.
I just wasn't 100% sure what would be overly abusive. I was simply thinking that paying would be fair sine the first card would be reduced by . second spell would be reduced by , third by and so on and so forth. Something like that in an artifact deck could cause you to cast an etire hand without paying a single mana cost if you have the right cards ready.
Manaweave is awkward. It's so difficult to make worthwhile with the reduction being a single mana. Ultimately, you never get to a point where it's easier to cast unless you figure out a way to free play a ton of stuff, which is probably a winning scenario anyway. I think a reduction of is just way more sensible. I also dislike that his ability is a tap ability. On bigger guys, a tap ability has to be amazing to be worth not attacking. It'd be neater for this to just have a combat damage trigger.
I was thinking of it being a tap ability at the end of your opponent's turn and playing off of their spells, but you're right. I guess I saw the card as a combo-maker, and not a beater, but I did give it the body of a beater, so that was my mistake. Either way, I still think reducing by would have been a really huge advantage, especially if he didn't tap. Also, as worded, manaweave stacks, so without tapping, I'd have to add in... more text to use only once per turn? I dunno.
After a lot of thinking, would this have been a better submission?
Djinn of Pleas -   Creature - Djinn - R Manaweave (This spell's mana cost is reduced by for each spell cast before it this turn.) Flying Cards in your hand have Manaweave.
: The next spell you cast has manaweave. Activate this ability only once each turn. "Some say the tides of war are driven by a single wish made in a moment of despair, giving shape to a creature of pure arcane energy." ~Genevi Archivist 3/5
I dunno, now I'm just playing around with the idea since I have input.
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1 year ago ::
May 24, 2012 - 3:41AM
#193
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From best to worst: Spoiler:
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Purple_Shrimp Tekkahedron Yushang Detektor Elzeban_the_Ethereal Exxile72 Cold_Articuno Degauss CKY iamajellydonut razorborne pietro_aronica BelangiaJo Sebanovich Mono789 Imidazoline silasw SleetFox squinty_eyes AnubisDread ChaosLight Lobster667 Edacade ulyth stinkyjoeterry Freyjann vlord AzureShade ChainofFools ickiwon SimonGlume RavenoftheBlack Fakeartist Fenix. TheScion rabble527 Dudibus Taramoor Megaboarian MurlocMaster
Everything Mown does is elegant.

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1 year ago ::
May 24, 2012 - 6:50AM
#194
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Should probably have Defender, even if it's 0/3. I quite like the interesting tension where a colorless card encourages colored cards. However, I think this card fails pretty hard as a promotional product. Also, I don't like homonculi being bear sized.
I didn't think they should be either, but Wizards sorta raised the bar on them and I completely forgot about Puppet Conjurer . In retrospect, I'd have made them 0/1's.
You fell victim to one of the classic blunders - The most famous of which is "never get involved in an thread with GM_Champion" - but only slightly less well-known is this: "Never go in against AzureShade when card design is on the line!
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1 year ago ::
May 24, 2012 - 9:22AM
#195
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- UnCon Prizewinner 2008
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Hah! So long as Kavu isn't suuuper mean, I think I'm in!
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you make paragraphs shorter than the page width
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1 year ago ::
May 24, 2012 - 9:45AM
#196
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- BCP5 Worldbuilding Lead
- Addicted to Chickens
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Hah! So long as Kavu isn't suuuper mean, I think I'm in! 
I was the first to post my rankings...
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1 year ago ::
May 24, 2012 - 9:49AM
#197
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- UnCon Prizewinner 2008
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Hah! So long as Kavu isn't suuuper mean, I think I'm in! 
I was the first to post my rankings...
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So you did. I am scared now.
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1 year ago ::
May 24, 2012 - 1:39PM
#198
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Final results
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Let me take a moment to explain the grades...
Rk = your rank KO = Kavu_Overlord's ranking RC = Rush_Clasic's ranking Mo = Mown's ranking Avera = average ranking of the judges combined St Dv = standard deviation of your ranking
Final rankings were determined by your average ranking, ties broken by your standard deviation. Your ranking is a good indicator of how your entry was liked overall, while the standard deviation tells you how accurate your ranking was. If you ranked in the top 12 and have a standard deviation 5 or lower, the judges all thought well of your card. If you were in the 18 - 24 slot with a low standard deviation, the judges collectively found your entry okay, but not great. If you were 18 - 24 with a high standard deviation, I'd focus on your worst judge's comments.
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01. 01|06|05 = 04.00 - 02.08 - Elzaban_the _Ethereal 02. 06|02|07 = 05.00 - 02.16 - Cold_Articuno 03. 14|03|03 = 06.67 - 05.18 - Yushang 04. 05|17|01 = 07.67 - 06.80 - Purple_Shrimp 05. 08|05|11 = 08.00 - 02.45 - razorborne 06. 12|10|02 = 08.00 - 04.32 - Tekkahedron 07. 07|09|09 = 08.33 - 00.94 - chinkeeyong 08. 09|04|12 = 08.33 - 03.30 - pietro_aronica 09. 04|12|14 = 10.00 - 04.32 - Mono789 10. 02|24|04 = 10.00 - 09.93 - Detektor 11. 26|01|06 = 11.00 - 10.80 - Exxile72 12. 15|11|16 = 14.00 - 02.16 - silasw 13. 10|19|13 = 14.00 - 03.74 - Sebanovich 14. 21|07|17 = 15.00 - 05.89 - SleetFox 15. 11|26|08 = 15.00 - 07.87 - Degauss 16. 03|28|15 = 15.33 - 10.21 - Imidazoline 17. 18|08|24 = 16.67 - 06.60 - stinkyjoeterry 18. 13|20|18 = 17.00 - 02.94 - squinty_eyes 19. 20|16|19 = 18.33 - 01.70 - AnubisDread 20. 24|14|22 = 20.00 - 05.29 - Edacade 21. 16|21|25 = 20.67 - 03.68 - Freyjann 22. 27|25|10 = 20.67 - 08.16 - iamajellydonut 23. 22|27|23 = 24.00 - 02.16 - ulyth 24. 17|30|26 = 24.33 - 05.44 - vlord --- 32|18|29 = 26.33 - ///// - ickiwon --- 33|15|33 = 27.00 - ///// - Fenix. --- 34|13|34 = 27.00 - ///// - theScion --- 19|29|35 = 27.67 - ///// - rabble527 --- 30|31|28 = 29.67 - ///// - ChainofFools --- 29|39|21 = 29.67 - ///// - Lobster667 --- 38|22|30 = 30.00 - ///// - SimonGlume --- 28|36|27 = 30.33 - ///// - AzureShade --- 37|37|20 = 31.33 - ///// - ChaosLight --- 23|35|36 = 31.33 - ///// - Dudibus --- 31|32|31 = 31.33 - ///// - RavenoftheBlack --- 35|23|37 = 31.67 - ///// - Taramoor --- 25|34|38 = 32.33 - ///// - Megaborian --- 36|38|32 = 35.33 - ///// - Fakeartist --- 39|33|39 = 37.00 - ///// - MurlocMaster Contestants Moving On
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AnubisDread chinkeeyong Cold_Articuno Degauss Detektor Edacade Elzaban_the_Ethereal Exxile72 Freyjann iamajellydonut Imidazoline Mono789 pietro_aronica Purple_Shrimp razorborne Sebanovich silasw SleetFox squinty_eyes stinkyjoeterry Tekkahedron ulyth vlord Yushang To all those who didn't make it, thanks for participating and come back future rounds for community participation. Next round starts tomorrow. See you then!
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1 year ago ::
May 24, 2012 - 1:46PM
#199
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So close (well not really :P). I hope to see what everyone comes up with as the contest continues. Maybe next year I'll qualify :D
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1 year ago ::
May 24, 2012 - 1:53PM
#200
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Date Joined:
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Well, not bad for my first one of these ever. Hopefully I'll be better at this by next year.
You fell victim to one of the classic blunders - The most famous of which is "never get involved in an thread with GM_Champion" - but only slightly less well-known is this: "Never go in against AzureShade when card design is on the line!
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