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1 year ago  ::  May 23, 2012 - 9:09PM #191
Imidazoline
Date Joined: Mar 9, 2004
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Eh, I guess I should have kept the more broken effect and gone with a little elf body for 5. Then I guess it wouldn't be so similar to Sifting for two. I still feel it's a different and appropriate way for black to do it, but at least the original effect allowed for Crypt Creeper-ing etc of the targeted card in response to the trigger.

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1 year ago  ::  May 23, 2012 - 11:51PM #192
squinty_eyes
Date Joined: Oct 14, 2006
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Yay, all comments are in!  Just so I say it:

May 19, 2012 -- 9:24PM, Kavu_Overlord wrote:

Affinity for spells cast this turn? Affinity-Storm? For being similar to two pretty overpowered mechanics, it seems balanced, maybe even on the weak side. Still, it's a cool intro to the mechanic and lets you come up with Manaweave combos for normal cards too



The popular opinion seems to be that the mechanic is weak.  I can see how that works, though I was planning for the mechanic to be abused in the block.  I was thinking that there would be a good bit of Suspend cards to allow you to stack them all to come into play on the same turn.  I thought things like that would help lower the cost, not to mention the mechanic wasn't meant to power out the cards quite the way people seem to be thinking.  It was more that playing enough before it would make them nearly free, almost like a trap.  I see that it wouldn't work quite that way, but that was the intent.

May 23, 2012 -- 2:36PM, Mown wrote:

I think I prefer Manaweaver over razorborne's mechanic, since it's a bit easier to control and doesn't go spell, spell, ASDGSADSAD you're dead. Not big on the name though. However, I am slightly sad that it doesn't actually let you cast the spell for less, unless you only cast 0-cost spells.
The activated ability could be better excecuted, as it is currently in conflict with the whole casting a lot of spells. I'd almost go as far and say that you could just have him tap, or even make it into a passive, so players won't have to ask themselves if the ability applies to newly drawn cards.



I just wasn't 100% sure what would be overly abusive.  I was simply thinking that paying would be fair sine the first card would be reduced by . second spell would be reduced by , third by and so on and so forth.  Something like that in an artifact deck could cause you to cast an etire hand without paying a single mana cost if you have the right cards ready.

May 23, 2012 -- 7:52PM, Rush_Clasic wrote:

Manaweave is awkward. It's so difficult to make worthwhile with the reduction being a single mana. Ultimately, you never get to a point where it's easier to cast unless you figure out a way to free play a ton of stuff, which is probably a winning scenario anyway. I think a reduction of is just way more sensible. I also dislike that his ability is a tap ability. On bigger guys, a tap ability has to be amazing to be worth not attacking. It'd be neater for this to just have a combat damage trigger.



I was thinking of it being a tap ability at the end of your opponent's turn and playing off of their spells, but you're right.  I guess I saw the card as a combo-maker, and not a beater, but I did give it the body of a beater, so that was my mistake.  Either way, I still think reducing by would have been a really huge advantage, especially if he didn't tap.  Also, as worded, manaweave stacks, so without tapping, I'd have to add in... more text to use only once per turn?  I dunno.

After a lot of thinking, would this have been a better submission?

Djinn of Pleas -
Creature - Djinn - R
Manaweave (This spell's mana cost is reduced by for each spell cast before it this turn.)
Flying
Cards in your hand have Manaweave.
: The next spell you cast has manaweave. Activate this ability only once each turn.
"Some say the tides of war are driven by a single wish made in a moment of despair, giving shape to a creature of pure arcane energy." ~Genevi Archivist
3/5

I dunno, now I'm just playing around with the idea since I have input.

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1 year ago  ::  May 24, 2012 - 3:41AM #193
Mown
Date Joined: Apr 28, 2008
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    Purple_Shrimp
    Tekkahedron
    Yushang
    Detektor
    Elzeban_the_Ethereal
    Exxile72
    Cold_Articuno
    Degauss
    CKY
    iamajellydonut
    razorborne
    pietro_aronica
    BelangiaJo
    Sebanovich
    Mono789
    Imidazoline
    silasw
    SleetFox
    squinty_eyes
    AnubisDread
    ChaosLight
    Lobster667
    Edacade
    ulyth
    stinkyjoeterry
    Freyjann
    vlord
    AzureShade
    ChainofFools
    ickiwon
    SimonGlume
    RavenoftheBlack
    Fakeartist
    Fenix.
    TheScion
    rabble527
    Dudibus
    Taramoor
    Megaboarian
    MurlocMaster

Jan 18, 2012 -- 3:34AM, Imidazoline wrote:

Everything Mown does is elegant.


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1 year ago  ::  May 24, 2012 - 6:50AM #194
AzureShade
Date Joined: Jan 30, 2012
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May 23, 2012 -- 2:36PM, Mown wrote:

Should probably have Defender, even if it's 0/3.
I quite like the interesting tension where a colorless card encourages colored cards.
However, I think this card fails pretty hard as a promotional product. Also, I don't like homonculi being bear sized.


I didn't think they should be either, but Wizards sorta raised the bar on them and I completely forgot about Puppet Conjurer .  In retrospect, I'd have made them 0/1's.

Dec 18, 2012 -- 7:05PM, magicpablo666 wrote:

You fell victim to one of the classic blunders - The most famous of which is "never get involved in an thread with GM_Champion" - but only slightly less well-known is this: "Never go in against AzureShade when card design is on the line!

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1 year ago  ::  May 24, 2012 - 9:22AM #195
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Hah! So long as Kavu isn't suuuper mean, I think I'm in!
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Oct 11, 2012 -- 9:16AM, Enigma256 wrote:

Oct 11, 2012 -- 8:50AM, Chaikov wrote:

What's wrong with my formating?

you make paragraphs shorter than the page width


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1 year ago  ::  May 24, 2012 - 9:45AM #196
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May 24, 2012 -- 9:22AM, iamajellydonut wrote:

Hah! So long as Kavu isn't suuuper mean, I think I'm in!




I was the first to post my rankings...

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1 year ago  ::  May 24, 2012 - 9:49AM #197
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May 24, 2012 -- 9:45AM, Kavu_Overlord wrote:

May 24, 2012 -- 9:22AM, iamajellydonut wrote:

Hah! So long as Kavu isn't suuuper mean, I think I'm in!




I was the first to post my rankings...



D:

So you did. I am scared now. 

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Oct 11, 2012 -- 9:16AM, Enigma256 wrote:

Oct 11, 2012 -- 8:50AM, Chaikov wrote:

What's wrong with my formating?

you make paragraphs shorter than the page width


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1 year ago  ::  May 24, 2012 - 1:39PM #198
Rush_Clasic
Date Joined: Mar 10, 2003
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Final results Show
Let me take a moment to explain the grades...

Rk = your rank
KO = Kavu_Overlord's ranking
RC = Rush_Clasic's ranking
Mo = Mown's ranking
Avera = average ranking of the judges combined
St Dv = standard deviation of your ranking

Final rankings were determined by your average ranking,  ties broken by your standard deviation. Your ranking is a good indicator of how your entry was liked overall, while the standard deviation tells you how accurate your ranking was. If you ranked in the top 12 and have a standard deviation 5 or lower, the judges all thought well of your card. If you were in the 18 - 24 slot with a low standard deviation, the judges collectively found your entry okay, but not great. If you were 18 - 24 with a high
standard deviation, I'd focus on your worst judge's comments.

RANKINGS

Rk KO|RC|Mo = Aver - StDv - Contestant

01. 01|06|05 = 04.00 - 02.08 - Elzaban_the _Ethereal
02. 06|02|07 = 05.00 - 02.16 - Cold_Articuno
03. 14|03|03 = 06.67 - 05.18 - Yushang
04. 05|17|01 = 07.67 - 06.80 - Purple_Shrimp
05. 08|05|11 = 08.00 - 02.45 - razorborne
06. 12|10|02 = 08.00 - 04.32 - Tekkahedron
07. 07|09|09 = 08.33 - 00.94 - chinkeeyong
08. 09|04|12 = 08.33 - 03.30 - pietro_aronica
09. 04|12|14 = 10.00 - 04.32 - Mono789
10. 02|24|04 = 10.00 - 09.93 - Detektor
11. 26|01|06 = 11.00 - 10.80 - Exxile72
12. 15|11|16 = 14.00 - 02.16 - silasw
13. 10|19|13 = 14.00 - 03.74 - Sebanovich
14. 21|07|17 = 15.00 - 05.89 - SleetFox
15. 11|26|08 = 15.00 - 07.87 - Degauss
16. 03|28|15 = 15.33 - 10.21 - Imidazoline
17. 18|08|24 = 16.67 - 06.60 - stinkyjoeterry
18. 13|20|18 = 17.00 - 02.94 - squinty_eyes
19. 20|16|19 = 18.33 - 01.70 - AnubisDread
20. 24|14|22 = 20.00 - 05.29 - Edacade
21. 16|21|25 = 20.67 - 03.68 - Freyjann
22. 27|25|10 = 20.67 - 08.16 - iamajellydonut
23. 22|27|23 = 24.00 - 02.16 - ulyth
24. 17|30|26 = 24.33 - 05.44 - vlord

--- 32|18|29 = 26.33 - ///// - ickiwon
--- 33|15|33 = 27.00 - ///// - Fenix.
--- 34|13|34 = 27.00 - ///// - theScion
--- 19|29|35 = 27.67 - ///// - rabble527
--- 30|31|28 = 29.67 - ///// - ChainofFools
--- 29|39|21 = 29.67 - ///// - Lobster667
--- 38|22|30 = 30.00 - ///// - SimonGlume
--- 28|36|27 = 30.33 - ///// - AzureShade
--- 37|37|20 = 31.33 - ///// - ChaosLight
--- 23|35|36 = 31.33 - ///// - Dudibus
--- 31|32|31 = 31.33 - ///// - RavenoftheBlack
--- 35|23|37 = 31.67 - ///// - Taramoor
--- 25|34|38 = 32.33 - ///// - Megaborian
--- 36|38|32 = 35.33 - ///// - Fakeartist
--- 39|33|39 = 37.00 - ///// - MurlocMaster



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AnubisDread
chinkeeyong
Cold_Articuno
Degauss
Detektor
Edacade
Elzaban_the_Ethereal
Exxile72
Freyjann
iamajellydonut
Imidazoline
Mono789
pietro_aronica
Purple_Shrimp
razorborne
Sebanovich
silasw
SleetFox
squinty_eyes
stinkyjoeterry
Tekkahedron
ulyth
vlord
Yushang


To all those who didn't make it, thanks for participating and come back future rounds for community participation. 

Next round starts tomorrow. See you then! 

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1 year ago  ::  May 24, 2012 - 1:46PM #199
rabble527
Date Joined: May 20, 2011
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 So close (well not really :P). I hope to see what everyone comes up with as the contest continues. Maybe next year I'll qualify :D
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1 year ago  ::  May 24, 2012 - 1:53PM #200
AzureShade
Date Joined: Jan 30, 2012
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Well, not bad for my first one of these ever.  Hopefully I'll be better at this by next year.

Dec 18, 2012 -- 7:05PM, magicpablo666 wrote:

You fell victim to one of the classic blunders - The most famous of which is "never get involved in an thread with GM_Champion" - but only slightly less well-known is this: "Never go in against AzureShade when card design is on the line!

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