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2 years ago ::
Aug 15, 2011 - 11:11AM
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Date Joined:
Jun 17, 2011
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The Drainer of Worlds 0 Legendary Artifact Creature - Titan Cast ~ only if you control 12 or more untapped lands. ~ is indestructible. Lands you control do not untap. 1: ~ deals 1 damage to target creature or player 0/12
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2 years ago ::
Aug 15, 2011 - 11:30AM
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Oct 10, 2009
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Seems like a lot of effort for very little result. Even if I cheat it into play, I still need a way to make my mana work.
maybe make it a 12/12
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2 years ago ::
Aug 15, 2011 - 12:15PM
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Date Joined:
Jul 20, 2011
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Seems pointless, to play that for 12 targeted damage, when I could just play Fireball . Maybe change it to 'Lands do not untap.' or 'Lands cannot be untapped.'
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2 years ago ::
Aug 15, 2011 - 12:22PM
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Date Joined:
Dec 22, 2010
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Yeah. I'd sooner like to see it make all lands not untap and get +1/+1 each time you activate its ability. That seems more "drain"-like to me.
Also, I'd lose the indestructibility. That's too much. You have 12 untapped lands, you should be able to stop removal on him.
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2 years ago ::
Aug 15, 2011 - 8:06PM
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Date Joined:
Jun 17, 2011
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How about this revision (Note, I powered down my original design a lot, this is closer to the original)
The Drainer of Worlds 0 Legendary Artifact Creature - Titan Cast ~ only if you control 10 or more untapped lands. Trample Lands can not be untapped 1, sacrifice an untapped land: ~ deals 2 damage to target creature or player Sacrifice 5 lands: Regenerate ~ 10/10
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2 years ago ::
Aug 16, 2011 - 4:29PM
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Date Joined:
Apr 22, 2010
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Latest revision is very cluttered, along with the fact that a lot of it's abilities are disconnected. Also, I do not believe the interactions that the first clause generates (Only being able to cast if you control 10 lands) is worth the random quirkiness. Just make it cost  . Also, this is an all in type card. If this gets destroyed after you've used even some of it's abilities, you've lost the game. Think about that when creating abilities that involve sacrificing your lands and notice how it could be unfun.
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DrJWilson - I really like how all the abilities worked together to create a really sweet card. This will be a popular pick for sure.
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Excellent design. Always loved Doubling Season and this card is an awesome variation on that.
As for the card itself, it is quite possible the best use of mono-red vigilance I've ever seen on the boards. Well done.
Love it.
Very good design.
I love it. Just find a good deck to use it against.
i like it. I can imagine a bear eating a land or something then farting out the land's essence.
Reminds me of a card I was working on earlier. I love the flavor and mechanics of this card. Great design and brilliant concept.
I don't care if the white zombies are off, I just really like this card. Also seems likes its got a backstory I'd like to hear about. Like how I was interested in Anowon, the Ruin Sage before I realized he came from a web comic.

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2 years ago ::
Aug 17, 2011 - 12:01PM
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Here's my stab at it. I like the Timmy appeal of the zero casting cost, but this may be a slightly less clunky way of going about that. The Drainer of Worlds --   Legendary Artifact Creature - Titan When ~ comes into play, you may untap up to 12 lands. Lands do not untap during their controler's untap step. Sacrifice a land: Untap target land.  : ~ deals 1 damage to target creature or player. 0/12
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