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2 years ago  ::  Jul 21, 2011 - 9:19PM #1
7_ate_9
Date Joined: May 23, 2011
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Well, everybody has ideas for planeswalker cards, so I decided to make this thread for everybody to post their own 'walker card and get constructive criticism.
No being mean (I mean YOU, troll-face!).

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Jul 24, 2011 -- 9:19PM, ThraxandKresh wrote:



@7_ate_9 what decks were they playing?  We're you playing multi-player, or what exactly? 

P.S. I hope you actually didn't... you know... do that with him and his friends.  They're magic cards man, who knows what diseases they carry .  You don't want to catch that stuff...






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2 years ago  ::  Jul 21, 2011 - 11:47PM #2
altimis
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Spenov, the Evoker --
Planeswalker - Spenov (MR)

[+2]: Each  player may put a permanent card from his or her hand onto the battlefield.
[-3]: Reveal the top card of your library. If a creature card was revealed this way, draw two cards.
[-8]: Each opponent gains an emblem "At the beginning of your end step discard down to 0 cards."
{4}

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My thoughts is it accelerates the game, until it completly demolishes the game. To me, it's fair because each player will get his or her chance to attack Spenov, unless they can't put a card into the battlefield. BUt if his ultimate shoots off, you don't have to pay for some of your creatures anymore.

=====xxxxx=====

Spoken of in Legends --
Planeswalker - Nameless (MR)

[+2]: End the turn. Activate this ability only if you control no tapped lands.
[-3]: Until the beginning of your next end step, creatures cannot attack you, or a planeswalker you control. 
[-6]: You gain an emblem "Tap target creature you control: Untap target land you control."
{4}

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I think it's too combo happy, lockdown.
Turn two: Sundial of the Infinite
Turn three: This. -3 activate sundial. (You should be ramping lol)
Turn four to six: "skip", meanwhile not able to be attacked.
turn seven to win: Dominate.

So I dunno about him, but that's what I had in mind while creating him.
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2 years ago  ::  Jul 22, 2011 - 8:22AM #3
7_ate_9
Date Joined: May 23, 2011
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Well, Concerning Spenov:

His cost should probably have 2 more in it.
His first + ability is pretty nice. Nothing crazy or fancy.
His second ability is kind of awkward, since you would basically only be drawing one card and adding the creature to your hand.
His ultimate is weird. I am still undecided on that one.


Spoken of in Legends:
His cost could go up at least by 1. Common 'walker card costs are usually 4-5 cmc.
His first ability is kind of lame, to be honest, since any situation where it might be useful would be well past the time for a miracle victory or anything.
His second is pretty nice. fitting, almost.
His last is a disappointment. Maybe if you ramped it up, by tapping an opponents permanents to untap your own.

That is just a general thing.
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The world perceives you as off your rocker, but that isn't true. You just make mental connections to things and don't entirely explain your thinking. So if you suddenly bring up birdhouses in geometry, you'll probably get some strange looks. You are rather impulsive but generally a good person.


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Jul 24, 2011 -- 9:19PM, ThraxandKresh wrote:



@7_ate_9 what decks were they playing?  We're you playing multi-player, or what exactly? 

P.S. I hope you actually didn't... you know... do that with him and his friends.  They're magic cards man, who knows what diseases they carry .  You don't want to catch that stuff...






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2 years ago  ::  Jul 22, 2011 - 8:36AM #4
7_ate_9
Date Joined: May 23, 2011
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I will say that these are pretty good, though.


Here is my sad attempt:

Krieges, the Warrior-Mage
Planeswalker-Krieges
This card has Split-Second.
3 loyalty.
[+1]: Creatures you control gain +2/+1 and doublestrike until the end of your turn.
[-3]: Creatures you control get 3 +1/+1 counters.
[-7]: Place an emblem into play with "Creatures you control are indestructible".

He is actually based off of some flavor & storyline stuff, since I am a native of those lands.
I have died and crowned myself
Yep...

Nyan cat powers, ACTIVATE!!!!
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YOU ARE THE "UNBALANCED''
Take Personality Test today!
Created with Rum and Monkey's Personality Test Generator.

The world perceives you as off your rocker, but that isn't true. You just make mental connections to things and don't entirely explain your thinking. So if you suddenly bring up birdhouses in geometry, you'll probably get some strange looks. You are rather impulsive but generally a good person.


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Jul 24, 2011 -- 9:19PM, ThraxandKresh wrote:



@7_ate_9 what decks were they playing?  We're you playing multi-player, or what exactly? 

P.S. I hope you actually didn't... you know... do that with him and his friends.  They're magic cards man, who knows what diseases they carry .  You don't want to catch that stuff...






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2 years ago  ::  Jul 22, 2011 - 8:39AM #5
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Date Joined: Jul 19, 2011
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Jul 21, 2011 -- 11:47PM, altimis wrote:

Spenov, the Evoker --
Planeswalker - Spenov (MR)

[+2]: Each  player may put a permanent card from his or her hand onto the battlefield.
[-3]: Reveal the top card of your library. If a creature card was revealed this way, draw two cards.
[-8]: Each opponent gains an emblem "At the beginning of your end step discard down to 0 cards."
{4}

-----

My thoughts is it accelerates the game, until it completly demolishes the game. To me, it's fair because each player will get his or her chance to attack Spenov, unless they can't put a card into the battlefield. BUt if his ultimate shoots off, you don't have to pay for some of your creatures anymore.

=====xxxxx=====

Spoken of in Legends --
Planeswalker - Nameless (MR)

[+2]: End the turn. Activate this ability only if you control no tapped lands.
[-3]: Until the beginning of your next end step, creatures cannot attack you, or a planeswalker you control. 
[-6]: You gain an emblem "Tap target creature you control: Untap target land you control."
{4}

-----

I think it's too combo happy, lockdown.
Turn two: Sundial of the Infinite
Turn three: This. -3 activate sundial. (You should be ramping lol)
Turn four to six: "skip", meanwhile not able to be attacked.
turn seven to win: Dominate.

So I dunno about him, but that's what I had in mind while creating him.




spoken wont do what you think he will. his -3 will mean creatures cant attack you until your next end step, and since you activate him during your main phase, it ends at the end of your turn

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2 years ago  ::  Jul 22, 2011 - 9:56AM #6
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Date Joined: Jan 20, 2011
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Time Stop , You don't ever go to the end step, but you do end the turn. It's the wording that makes it work. As long as you can kick it with the Sundial of Infinite once (twice once you ultimate) creatures won't be able to attack you for the rest of the game. I'm still working on how to make him useful otherwise lol.

And as for Spenov, his ultimate is essentially making sure that you can put stuff out for free, and your opponents can't. the wording is wierd so that no matter what your opponents have for shenanigans they will still have 0 cards in hand at the end of their turn.
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2 years ago  ::  Jul 22, 2011 - 10:00AM #7
Karn_Redeemer
Date Joined: Jul 13, 2011
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Quake, Corrupted Mountain
Planeswalker-Quake
+X: Tap X lands you control.
-X: Add X or to your mana pool.
-20: All opponents lose life equal to double the number of Swamps and Mountains you control.
{4}

Thoughts? I'm thinking its final is the worst part...
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2 years ago  ::  Jul 22, 2011 - 10:20AM #8
7_ate_9
Date Joined: May 23, 2011
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Jul 22, 2011 -- 10:00AM, Karn_Redeemer wrote:

Quake, Corrupted Mountain
Planeswalker-Quake
+X: Tap X lands you control.
-X: Add X or to your mana pool.
-20: If you control more Mountains and Swamps than your opponent, you win the game.
{4}

Thoughts? I'm thinking its final is the worst part...




Well, The final is to...final.
No final ability on a walker will say "win the game" no matter how much I keep wishing.
The ultimate could go something like this (merely a suggestion):

[-20]: (cardname) deals damage equal to double the number of swamps and mountains you control.

His first is powerful, yet balanced. His cost is expensive, but I think logical for that color deck and that ultimate.
His second is pretty awesome, especially if you are gonna use a Banefire or Corrupt .
His ultimate: all I have to say is above.
His loyalty is even well balanced.
Damn, boy.

I have died and crowned myself
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Nyan cat powers, ACTIVATE!!!!
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The world perceives you as off your rocker, but that isn't true. You just make mental connections to things and don't entirely explain your thinking. So if you suddenly bring up birdhouses in geometry, you'll probably get some strange looks. You are rather impulsive but generally a good person.


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Jul 24, 2011 -- 9:19PM, ThraxandKresh wrote:



@7_ate_9 what decks were they playing?  We're you playing multi-player, or what exactly? 

P.S. I hope you actually didn't... you know... do that with him and his friends.  They're magic cards man, who knows what diseases they carry .  You don't want to catch that stuff...






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2 years ago  ::  Jul 22, 2011 - 10:25AM #9
Karn_Redeemer
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I changed his final, he is COMPLETE Cry
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2 years ago  ::  Jul 22, 2011 - 4:24PM #10
Zielheim
Date Joined: Nov 15, 2010
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Torva Silva
Planeswalker- Torva
+2: Put a 1/1 green Elf Warrior creature token onto the battlefield.
-2: Search your library for a basic land card and put it into play tapped.
-10: Torva Silva deals 10 damage to all creatures with flying you don't control. Then, put a 10/10 green Elemental creature token with flying onto the battlefield.
{4}

She's pretty much a walking Presence of Gond and Rampant Growth until you get her ultimate to go off. Then she creates a one-sided Whirlwind-like effect that leaves a flyer after it's all settled.

Jul 22, 2011 -- 8:36AM, 7_ate_9 wrote:

Krieges, the Warrior-Mage
Planeswalker-Krieges
This card has Split-Second.
3 loyalty.
[+1]: Creatures you control gain +2/+1 and doublestrike until the end of your turn.
[-3]: Creatures you control get 3 +1/+1 counters.
[-7]: Place an emblem into play with "Creatures you control are indestructible".

He is actually based off of some flavor & storyline stuff, since I am a native of those lands.


The problem is where you'd fit the text to include him having split-second.

Plus, it's just too strong; you don't even need to bother with the  second ability if you can make your army hit twice. The first ability  effectively increases the amount of damage dealt by 4, while the second  increases it permanently by 3, but when you consider that the first  ability gets you one step closer to his ultimate, you don't really need  to be using his -3. I mean, he costs 6; giving everything a permanent  +3/+3 is nice, but considering the deck he'd most likely be in, the  chance to kill off creatures BEFORE they can hit is a lot better.

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