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4 months ago  ::  Feb 12, 2013 - 6:11PM #2401
GeorgeW
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Enchantment - Aura
Enchant Creature
Enchanted creature gains all creature types of all creatures you control.
Enchanted creature gets +2/+2 for each creature type it has.
When ~ is put into a graveyard from the battlefield, return ~ to its owner's hand.
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"Enchanted creature gains all creature types of all creatures you control." is the line that I'm wondering about.
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4 months ago  ::  Feb 12, 2013 - 9:27PM #2402
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Enchanted creature has all creature types of all creatures you control.
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3 months ago  ::  Feb 12, 2013 - 11:29PM #2403
altimis
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Is this worded correctly?

Put a */* green and blue Ooze creature token onto the battlefield. It has "This creature's power is equal to the combined power of creature cards attached to it, and it's toughness is equal to the combined toughness.", and "This creature has all abilities of all creature cards attached to it." Then, exile the top X cards of your library and attach each creature card exiled this way to that creature.
(X is defined in the cost...)

My other ideas:
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Put a */* green and blue Ooze creature token onto the battlefield. It has "This creature's power is equal to the combined power of creature cards attached to it, and it's toughness is equal to the combined toughness.", and "This creature has all abilities of all creature cards attached to it." Then, exile the top X cards of your library and attach each creature card exiled this way to that creature.


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Put a */* green and blue Ooze creature token with "This creature's power is equal to the combined power of creature cards attached to it, and it's toughness is equal to the combined toughness", and "This creature has all abilities of all creature cards attached to it" onto the battlefield. Then, exile the top X cards of your library and attach each creature card exiled this way to that creature.


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Put a */* green and blue Ooze creature token onto the battlefield and exile the top X cards of your library and attach each creature card exiled this way to that creature. That creature has "This creature's power is equal to the combined power of creature cards attached to it, and it's toughness is equal to the combined toughness.", and "This creature has all abilities of all creature cards attached to it."


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Feb 5, 2013 -- 9:38PM, Dr_Demento wrote:

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3 months ago  ::  Feb 13, 2013 - 1:13AM #2404
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Feb 12, 2013 -- 11:29PM, altimis wrote:

Is this worded correctly?


Exile the top X cards of your library and put a green and blue Ooze creature token onto the battlefield. Its power is equal to the total power of creature cards exiled this way, its toughness is equal to the total toughness of those cards, and it has all abilities of those cards.

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Apr 19, 2012 -- 5:36AM, prospector wrote:

Think of how Neo couldn't beat the robots, but they kept him around anyways to defeat Agent Smith. Sure, the robots might not like having a Neo running rampant because instead of playing their favorite 4 drop fatty robot, they have to play a bunch of one mana Matrixs to contain him, but at least Neo keeps Agent Smith from reanimating an Iona on turn two.

Jun 26, 2012 -- 3:07PM, GM_Champion wrote:

Are you saying I'm trying to blame my loss on something? I don't care that I lost, I care that he's a sore loser, and a cheater, and a liar.

Oct 5, 2012 -- 1:36PM, magicpablo666 wrote:

CKY, are you bad at anything?

Oct 25, 2012 -- 9:53PM, magicpablo666 wrote:

I really enjoy imagining this from Kevin's perspective. Because in Kevin's world, Rosewater actually reads everything he types. Mark is sitting there right now, reading this, and thinking "The greatest trick the devil ever pulled. . ." Or some such. He chuckles low, then clicks on "The Best Of KEVINSET" and says "Yes, this'll do just fine. A busty lady with banding who deals direct damage to Zones!? Why this will be the star of my next set, and no one will ever believe you Kevin." Then he closes his Macbook, so his servant may move it out of the way, while another servant puts a Fetal Richard Garfield Clone lathered in Steak Sauce in front of him. Then Mark Feasts.

I mean, In KevinWorld, Mark is reading the very words I'm typing as well. Heck, in KevinWorld maybe I am Mark.

Nov 9, 2012 -- 2:27PM, Exxile72 wrote:

I'm beginning to think CKY may be anime in real life...

Feb 11, 2013 -- 7:38AM, Jessica_Morgan wrote:

Don't go anywhere CKY, I need to crash dramatically through your window and propose marriage and I don't want you throwing off my paradrop.

Mar 15, 2013 -- 7:56AM, Knifethrower wrote:

[In response to a thread about how hard grading is]

Upon reading this, I've found myself completely unable to operate in the world.  I tried to decide what to eat for breakfast, and pondered the vast consequences of my choice.  How do I balance my dietary needs against my desire to eat good-tasting food? Should I factor in how long it takes to prepare?  Cereal is ready in moments, but bacon takes longer to cook.

Then there is the impact on other industries.  Do people in the cereal industry deserve to be employed more than people in the bacon industry?  Which industry should I support? I don't even have the data regarding HOW MUCH the cereal industry benefits from me eating a bowl of cereal, or how much the bacon industry benefits from me eating a side of bacon.  How can I compare two qualities I can't even quantify?

And let's not forget the milk on the cereal.  In addition to determining whether or not milk is healthy for me, how much that benefits the milk industry, and how much the people in the milk industry deserve my support, we have to factor in the fact that cows are put under brutal conditions in order to collect thier milk.  Of course, the same goes for the pigs, and then they get killed.  Of course, I really like bacon.  So I need to come up with a scale that compares the value of cow happiness to pig happiness to my happiness.  What trade-offs am I willing to make here?  Does the fact that the pig gets put out of its misery count as a plus or a minus?  Isn't bacon bad for me anyway?

Deciding what to eat for breakfast (or any meal) is impossible.  Help me!

Apr 11, 2013 -- 6:15AM, altimis wrote:

I must admit chinkeeyong, you have the most interesting character ideas; and you play them well.

Apr 12, 2013 -- 7:13PM, magicpablo666 wrote:

Anyway, you'd be surprised about Time Stop. When I first saw that card as a relatively new player I didn't see its full potential until I read the reminder text. Is it that unintuitive, though? Mine I mean. What is possibility? Is it possible for me to type these words with my tusks? No, because I don't have tusks. Although I am now tempted to go buy some - obviously not from poachers or whatever - and use them as typing apparatus. I could be the best secretary ever. "What's your words per minute sir?" "Well, only six, but I use these tusks to type them." "You're hired!" That was the interview. And is anyone else disappointed that "apparati" is not the plural form of apparatus? I just could strangle a dictionary, because "apparatuses" is a real word. I guess it sounds pretty cool. I'll call them my Apparatusks.

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3 months ago  ::  Feb 13, 2013 - 7:20AM #2405
altimis
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Feb 13, 2013 -- 1:13AM, chinkeeyong wrote:

Feb 12, 2013 -- 11:29PM, altimis wrote:

Is this worded correctly?


Exile the top X cards of your library and put a green and blue Ooze creature token onto the battlefield. Its power is equal to the total power of creature cards exiled this way, its toughness is equal to the total toughness of those cards, and it has all abilities of those cards.




I feel like I need the */* still. But I'll take two and a half lines over four lines!
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3 months ago  ::  Feb 13, 2013 - 11:06AM #2406
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Feb 13, 2013 -- 7:20AM, altimis wrote:

Feb 13, 2013 -- 1:13AM, chinkeeyong wrote:

Feb 12, 2013 -- 11:29PM, altimis wrote:

Is this worded correctly?


Exile the top X cards of your library and put a green and blue Ooze creature token onto the battlefield. Its power is equal to the total power of creature cards exiled this way, its toughness is equal to the total toughness of those cards, and it has all abilities of those cards.




I feel like I need the */* still. But I'll take two and a half lines over four lines!
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chinkeeyong's text is good and you don't need */* as the power and toughness are defined in the effect that generates the token.
Some other cards that do similar things.
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Broken Visage
Elephant Resurgence
Gemini Engine
Gutter Grime
Kalitas, Bloodchief of Ghet
Saproling Burst
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3 months ago  ::  Feb 14, 2013 - 3:18PM #2407
Shiny_Umbreon
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Charging Turtle
Creature - Turtle
1/1
: CARDNAME gets +2/+2 and has trample during your next turn.

Is this fine? 
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3 months ago  ::  Feb 14, 2013 - 3:58PM #2408
CommanderJim
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Feb 14, 2013 -- 3:18PM, Shiny_Umbreon wrote:

Charging Turtle
Creature - Turtle
1/1
: CARDNAME gets +2/+2 and has trample during your next turn.

Is this fine? 



I think a safer wording would be ": At the beginning of your next upkeep, Charging Turtle gets +2/+2 and gains trample until end of turn."

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3 months ago  ::  Feb 16, 2013 - 8:24PM #2409
Arazlam
Date Joined: Jan 15, 2013
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Hey guys and gals, does this wording work?

Until end of turn, target creature gains flying and all creatures with flying you control get +1/+1.

Or should I make it something like:

Target creature gains flying until end of turn. Then, all creatures with flying you control get +1/+1 until end of turn.

??
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3 months ago  ::  Feb 16, 2013 - 10:59PM #2410
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You could provide a line break.

Target creature gains flying until end of turn.
Flying creatures you control get +1/+1 until end of turn.
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