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Sticky: YMTC Wording Clinic - No Appointment Necessary
3 years ago  ::  Jan 07, 2010 - 7:01PM #1
Callix
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So I was chilling over in Rules Q&A, when I noticed that there were a few threads asking about YMTC wordings over there. I thought to myself "There must be a bunch of people who don't want to head over to RQ&A for these questions, and we used to have a thread for this ourselves." So I've decided to re-open the Wording Clinic.

Here's how it works: If you're not sure about how well one of your cards works, post it here. If you see a card here, tell the poster whether or not their card works with the rules. If it doesn't work, try to suggest a way that does, or at least explain why there is a problem. Feel free to post replies - I can't be online to answer questions 24/7, but if people who know the answers keep posting, the thread can maintain a good turn-around time on help requests.

So, by the power invested in me by me, I declare the YMTC Wording Clinic open!
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3 years ago  ::  Jan 07, 2010 - 7:06PM #2
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Yes! Go over to Zammm's Pop Quiz thread and...

Fix!
That!
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Aug 19, 2010 -- 5:52PM, Vektor480 wrote:

Aug 19, 2010 -- 4:54PM, Dr_Demento wrote:

Aug 19, 2010 -- 4:27PM, TranscientMaster wrote:

Aug 19, 2010 -- 3:07PM, Dr_Demento wrote:

Riggers , every Rigger in print so far boosts other Riggers .



Moriok Rigger does absolutely nothing to boost other riggers. You are incorrect.



Moriok Rigger is not a Rigger in print. Only in Errata

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3 years ago  ::  Jan 07, 2010 - 7:15PM #3
Callix
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The card's inherently unfixable - that's the whole reason zammm made it. This does a good job, though:

Pseudosubject :1mana::symgu:
Creature - Homunculus
Whenever Pseudosubject becomes the target of an instant or sorcery spell you control, you may pay :1mana:. If you do, that spell gains "Return this spell to its owner's hand.".
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0/1

Should be functionally very similar, except it can be Stifle d.
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3 years ago  ::  Jan 07, 2010 - 7:19PM #4
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That is essentially what I was looking for.
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Aug 19, 2010 -- 5:52PM, Vektor480 wrote:

Aug 19, 2010 -- 4:54PM, Dr_Demento wrote:

Aug 19, 2010 -- 4:27PM, TranscientMaster wrote:

Aug 19, 2010 -- 3:07PM, Dr_Demento wrote:

Riggers , every Rigger in print so far boosts other Riggers .



Moriok Rigger does absolutely nothing to boost other riggers. You are incorrect.



Moriok Rigger is not a Rigger in print. Only in Errata

WHAT NOW!

(yes, I did put that phrase in for that exact reason)


Congratulations, they have activated your trap card!


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3 years ago  ::  Jan 07, 2010 - 7:23PM #5
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just like on the MSE forums :D this will be a great resource!

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3 years ago  ::  Jan 07, 2010 - 8:10PM #6
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Soul Battery (4)(W)

Artifact

If soul battery was to be put in your graveyard from play, shuffle it into your library instead

whenever a creature enters the graveyard from the battlefield, put a charge counter on Soul Battery.

Remove X Charge counters from Soul Battery, Exile Soul Battery (T): add 2X colorless mana to your mana pool. You lose 1 health for each mana gained this way.
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3 years ago  ::  Jan 07, 2010 - 8:19PM #7
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Soul Battery 4W
Artifact
If Soul Battery would be put into your graveyard from the battlefield, instead shuffle it into your library.
Whenever a creature is put into a graveyard from the battlefield, put a charge counter on Soul Battery.
T, remove any number of charge counters from Soul Battery and exile it: Add 2 to your mana pool for each charge counter removed this way. You lose 2 life for each charge counter removed this way.

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I'm not sure if this works with how spells are cast:

Frenzied Rioters 3RR
Creature - Human Warrior (U)
When Frenzied Rioters enters the battlefield, an opponent of your choice chooses one  - Up to three target creatures can't block this turn; or creatures you control get +1/+0 and gain haste until end of turn.
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3 years ago  ::  Jan 07, 2010 - 8:21PM #8
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Never put exile ~ or sacrifice ~ before . It's really confusing to see that on a card. That's why wizards almost always puts tap first or second (after mana).
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3 years ago  ::  Jan 07, 2010 - 8:23PM #9
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If soul battery would be put into a graveyard from the battlefield, shuffle it into its owner's library instead.

Whenever a creature is put into a graveyard from the battlefield, put a charge counter on Soul Battery.

T, Remove any number of charge counters from Soul Battery, Exile Soul Battery: Add {2} to your mana pool for each counter removed this way. You lose 2 life for each charge counter removed this way.
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3 years ago  ::  Jan 07, 2010 - 10:20PM #10
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What happened to the old Wording Clinic?

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