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Switch to Forum Live View 8/13/2008 Feature: "The Hunter and the Veil: Part 3"
5 years ago  ::  Aug 11, 2008 - 3:59PM #1
WotC_Monty
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This thread is for discussion of the webcomic feature, which goes live Wednesday morning on magicthegathering.com.
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5 years ago  ::  Aug 11, 2008 - 4:12PM #2
Hacimen
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Cool! In case we missed it the first time we get to see it again
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5 years ago  ::  Aug 12, 2008 - 11:19PM #3
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Niiiiice.
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5 years ago  ::  Aug 13, 2008 - 12:48AM #4
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I *think* I liked it, but I wasn't sure what was happening. I liked the second one best.
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5 years ago  ::  Aug 13, 2008 - 6:18AM #5
eidtelnvil
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Good art, story still sucks. Dialogue is horrible: "Excuse me while I slip into something a little more ... POWERFUL!" Argh.

A nice start, but next time spend time on the story before releasing it.
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5 years ago  ::  Aug 13, 2008 - 7:22AM #6
Mr_Bones
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Nice. The art was good but the dialogue really jarred for me.
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5 years ago  ::  Aug 13, 2008 - 7:27AM #7
japoniano
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No continuity at all:

1. Me.Garruck.Me.Hunt.

2. Hi, my name's Lily! Wanna do cliché things?

3. [Inset mandatory fight scenes]
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5 years ago  ::  Aug 13, 2008 - 8:04AM #8
Sacrificial23
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So, from what I remember about Vess from the Planeswalker minisite, it mentioned that she had stolen something from demon's and was now being hunted.

I take it that this story just told us that portion of Vess' life. The demons have "sent" Garruk to track her down (I don't think he's dead yet).

Anyways I enjoyed it, except for the dialouge. The only thing more cliche is that part in Spider-man 3 where he lands right in front of that American flag on the way to fight Sandman. Seriously, fix the dialouge.
I have no problems, I could just use a bit of time.
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5 years ago  ::  Aug 13, 2008 - 8:05AM #9
illagong
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The Hunter and the Veil: Part 3]"I like you axe. Very manly."




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Now I want to see a GB garruk in a futu wrote:

"I like you axe. Very manly."[/quote]


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Now I want to see a GB garruk in a future set.

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5 years ago  ::  Aug 13, 2008 - 8:08AM #10
Hacimen
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They aren't advancing this story well at all. This reads as if whole pages are missing. Either that or the characters really are that wooden.
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