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Great ideas - the setting is very imaginative and you play with and subvert cliches wonderfully. But due to your somewhat unclear writing style and the lack of any organization all I've been able to glean is a series of interesting, clever and apparently unconnected ideas. I would suggest that before posting anything else you edit and re-organize your posts to make the world a little more cohesive.