Monomania: Mistveil Knight and Alluring Maneater

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Mistveil Knight
Creature—Elemental Knight
When Mistveil Knight enters the battlefield, you may gain 1 life.
Whenever Mistveil Knight comes the target of a spell or ability an opponent controls or is dealt damage by a source an opponent controls, reveal the top card of your library.  If it's a land card, exile Mistveil Knight, then return it to the battlefield.  Then put the revealed card on the bottom of your library.
2/3

I wanted to make a card that could turn into mist when it is hurt, but not do it all the time.  It's slightly awkward that it triggers even if it's dealt lethal damage, but I don't know of an elegant solution to that.

Alluring Maneater
Creature—Plant
Deathtouch
Alluring Maneater must be blocked if able.
1/3

I originally had this at 2 mana, but it felt far too stifling against early plays.  3 mana is more acceptable and makes it more likely that your opponent can at least trade with it one for one.
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Nice cards.

With mistveil knight, i think it's fine that it "turns into mist" even when dealt lethal. If you really wanted to push it you could make it a 3/3 and lose the lifegain which I don't think does much here.

You're right on the mana cost for alluring maneater otherwise he will always be just above the curve taking down 2/2s in it's wake.  Nice design 

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MAKE YOU CUT CORDS
WISH YOU NEVER EVER MET HER AT ALL

ty writes the best flavor text.

As for the Knight, maybe just remove the damage clause altogether?  
when an opponent targets this
(with a spell or abilitry)
 

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ty writes the best flavor text.

As for the Knight, maybe just remove the damage clause altogether?  


That's an option, but I kind of wanted it to be a thing that could occur reasonably often.  I don't know.
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