You are having land trouble. Cut the Nirkana Revenant, Chosen of Markov, and Drana. Add three more lands. Preferably something white and black producing. Godless Shrine, Caves of Koilos, Isolated Chapel. If you still have mana troubles (you shouldn't), add a fourth land.
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Aggro in vintage can work, but it requires some pretty specific cards.
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