[Dinoblast] An rpg among dinosaurs and laster blasts


This might not be the correct forum but I hope it is okay.

I have several rpg projects (pen and paper) and now I need feedback. So I post a link to one of them here: www.veus.se/Dinoblast.pdf, it is only 19 pages long and the rules are simple.

I hope someone can read and and tell me what they think. I have found an illustrator that will do a cover page and I will update the pdf now and then.

The game is about humans 250 million years into the future where dinosaurs once agian live on earth. It is highley inspired by Dino Riders so there will be lots of laser weapons.